Very touvvhing even though it is a bit more sap than I usually prefer.

Aw, that's so sweet.

That is the most beautiful, sweetest, most heart pulling fic I have ever, ever, ever read. This is so beauitful ... you could almost imagine them saying it ... oh god, poor Heero ... this is so beautiful ... I've already said that I know ... oh god I'm crying ... everyone should read this.

Quite possibly the best fic I have ever read.

DIW

Aw cute! It's different and I like it!

i really like this story. it has a lot of emotions behind it. hmm, as for the grammar, i usually notice it when it's bad and then ignore it. maybie later i'll go back and proofread it for you. please don't hold your breath, though. i'm usually busy with school, but i'll try. keep up the good work!

it's not like your going to read this but i noticed a gramma mistake..

you didn't inspire me much respect then

you didn't inspire much respect in me then
but wll done for wrighting in a diferent laungue i cant even do one propably so bravo and i love your story realy descripteve well done

That was so sweet!

DON"T BE ASHAMED! this was a *great* fic. right up there in my guiness book of world records for the greatest fics! _ and you know what? until i read your bio i didn't even know you were French! That's how good your english writing is! i've seen anglophones write a thousand times worse than you did! and i didn't see any words that gave the sentence a strange ring, but then again i know some french too, so maybe i'm just used to it. but anyway, GREAT FIC! _ very cute!

Yes, it was sap, but it was beautiful, beautiful sap. It put a smile on my lips and tears in my eyes. Well done.

omg... gah, so sad!

Jezz, I was hard pressed not to cry! *sniffel* Poor Heero... I LOVE YOU HEERO! and Duo had better realise he luvs ya too!

Heero crying, it's an image that can easily mak me want to cry myself... gah, SOMEBODY GIVE HEERO A HUG!

That was so sweet! I loved it! Seeing Heero this way... nearly at the end, when he breaks down on Duo and the others tries to sooth him, that was really beautiful. Really good fic!

Great story... I love the fact that Duo gets to be the lost and confused one, for once. _ Well-written, too! You have no need to be ashamed about your writing... there were only a few strange phrases that I noticed, but it wasn't bothersome, and I can't seem to remember what they were now. xx
Anyhow... great work! _

It's so pretty. I love it! Cuddles are indeed wondrous things, and according to my friend Sage, they possess magical healing properties.

Wow, wow, wow. I've never read anything like this before! I'm utterly speechless. Lord, I wish I could write like you!

That was great! So sweet...

A few English suggestions
It's usually said that you are angry "at" someone, not angry "against them
Also, when Duo was saying "All will be all right" it might be better to say "It'll be alright" or "everything will be alright."