Wow! Sorry I'm not logged in- im too lazy to right now... Bleh.
But WOW! I just spent the day reading your story and it is SO amazing! It's my first time reading about Lizzie and Edwin and you really dazzled me!

Okay. Bit of advice, don't tell people that you feel like you hate the chapter or it's blah because that is a major turn-off from reading more.

that was quite the little angsty story there. thanks so much for the effort. i enjoyed it.

this is one of my faves this story is AWSOME

wow...i just have to say: i know it's because they love each other and all, but should casey and derek have had sex that early into their feelings?

Poor Edwin. I seriously feel so bad for the kid.

So Teddy literally knocking some sense into Edwin was good, especially the way he pointed out what we all were thinking. Aw Edwin is finally being responsible and he and Lizzie are starting a real relationship.
Poor Derek, when Casey finally confesses to him he doesn't believe her, but I thought that Casey refusing to stop there and tried to make him see that she was telling the truth was very IC for Casey. Nice ending, it would be nice to have a sequel. Great story!

of course u should do a sequel
ur an amazing writer :)

You're evil.

amazing story! I loved it <3 very well written. I really enjoyed it :)

Okay, so I as going to write a big long review that was in-depth and stuff, but I don't honestly think I can summon the energy. (Four hours sleep is a KILLER.)
Anyhoo, on with the review. :)
Lizzie and Edwin's relationship was interesting, especially Lizzie's unwillingness to admit her love to him, and I was beyond frustrated at that scene where Edwin professed his love. Don't get me wrong, I loved it and it was a great scene. I mean, what a way for Edwin to tell her!! Awesome.
I was hoping though that she was going to hear that he was asking Michelle for tips on how to tell her, and Lizzie would feel incriedbly guilty-- because well, she should -- but it ended up with Edwin apologising? Mmkay.
I loved the Dasey ending, but my favourite Dasey scene was the one where Derek told her 'why he cares'. Priceless!
I thought it was a great story, with a good plot and very good writing. So well done!lol
My only critque, is that I found the ending rushed and the characters OOC at times. Fair enough if you portray a character differently, that's not what I mean, I meant that your characters change a lot in the course of the story. Casey for example. Perhaps Lizzie, too.
Secondly, I do think the ending was rushed. The parents reactions were slightly... unrealistic. Nora knew all along?? George didn't really mind? I just thought they would have sat Lizzie and Edwin down and talked or something, you know.
Anyway, regardless, it was a great fic and I enjoyed reading it! My first time reading a Lizwin and it was brilliant.
Keep writing, you're good!lol
xCailinNollaigx

Casey is a physco there. Complete phsyco. You painted her as those murderers almost, who just hit and abuse their victims without so much as a casual shrug. You painted hr as a hypocrite -- critisising her sister for kissing Edward when what she was doing to Lizzie was just as bad.
You really put her in a bad light. And I'm not a *huge* fan of Casey, but it's extremely OOC and... kind of stupid, to be perfectly honest. You changed her just so there could be a "villan" and some drama. I don't like it. She seemed like an abuser or something.
Anyway, on the plus side, I do like your Derek. But I'll talk more about that at the end.
Ill review again at the end, just had to say that.
xCailinNollaigx

*chants*
sequel, sequel, sequel!

THAT WAS AMAZING!

yes hell yes sequel. I loved this story.

WO! I LOVW YOU! *Pulls self together* Okay, Im better. I loved it, and it was a joy to read. I laughed, I cried, and I took a couple showers.