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Starkiller
2008-05-10 . chapter 4
Argh, why didn't I look for this on before now? XD Well, you know how much I love this, you're a wonderful storyteller and you're true to every character, which is a rare thing in the fandom. And the fact that Fabian and Gideon have lead roles just gives this fic an extra boost of uber WIN! So UPDATE, mwaha! =D
Leaviel
2008-03-22 . chapter 3
yay! I read through it again... I like that you decided to keep Lee and Angelina together.
my only comment for here, criticism-wise is that you need to have something to separate the different parts of the story. I know you had those squiggly lines in editing, but do they not show up here? I dunno... 'tis a bit weird, though...
but I likes it! ^_^
nightstargazer
2008-03-10 . chapter 1
I really like this idea! I followed the link from your dev art (I'm stargazer803), and am impressed. It was clever to use a Patronus to reach the dead; great writing! Will more about Fab and Gid be revealed soon? I like the name Gideon, by the way. :)
elviella
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
This sounds really interesting. I'm waiting for the following chapters.:D
Leaviel
2008-02-21 . chapter 1
hullo! I found you! ^_^
I still need to read the 1st chapter, though it might be a day or two before I get the chance... college is killing me right now... which is exactly why it's 4:40am and I haven't started my midterm for Voice and Diction that's due tomorrow... ok, technically today... damn. I need to get that done.

woops, that was kinda random... ^^; OH WELL...
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