Awesome story. the ending kinda took away from the happy sorta mood, but it was good anyhow. ^_^
If i tried to write a story with these two, it would be so out of character, but you did great with this!

I'm sorry this is so late. I thought i had reviewed actually. Haha oops well i'll get on with the review. I simply loved this, I thought it was funny how they had to spend the whole day together and they hated each other in the beginning. It got more funny as the story progressed. Tsunade can be evil in a good way right? Jiraiya hardly ever questions Tsunade, for the most part because he likes her (even in his old age). Poor Sasuke constantly being compared to Orochimaru. I swear in the beginning Jiraiya was doing it to annoy Sasuke but now I see that just how he saw the poor boy. I like your version of Sasuke more then the manga version. Haha in fact when Sasuke from the canon left, I hated him for doing such a thing. I think you did an awesome job with this and I can't wait to read your many other fanfics. When I get time I'll have to look at the rest of them. ^^ I myself love writing about Jiraiya as well and if you ever feel bored you can drop by my page I have two naruto fanfics and a Bleach/Naruto crossover (I actually don't know where to put the crossover one, is there a button for crossovers?). Well anyway I enjoyed this fic. keep on the great work.

~SaitouuRyuuji~

OMG! *glomp* I'm sorry I took forever in getting around to reading this!! -feels bad- And...ehehe...it \was\ rather long...^^;; NO! I LIKE BEING DIFFERENT WITH THE SLANTY \ THINGS!! LET THE WORDS BE IMAGINARY-ITALICIZED TO THE \LEFT\!

*ahem* Anywho--my favorite part:

“We’re ditching him, right?”

“Definitely, let’s go.”

“Right behind you.”

-sighs- Good, good times...And this fic reminds me a lot of this icon thingamjig I have of Naruto and Jiraiya, Sakura and Tsunade, and Sasuke and Orochimaru that says "History Repeats Itself". ...I miss that icon...I'ma go find it...

ANYWHOSUMS!! Great job!~ Sorry I'm spazzy--I just got full computer rights back and it feels GREAT!! Who0o0o0o...

Ja mata~! =3

I love this! Some parts made me laugh, some parts even made me want to cry! You're an awesome writer!!

Yeah!! Still the first one to review!! ^^
No, the story can't be finished, I want more interaction between these two! ^_^
Okay, comments to a few scenes:
At the beginning: I can so imagine Jiraiya standing in Tsundade's office, screaming with a high pitched voice and laying on the floor punching it.
I feel really sorry for Sasuke. Everywhere he turns he gets reminded of Itachi. If I was Jiraiya I would have hugged him back there.
You know, when Jiraiya slammed Sasuke into the wall I imagined mayself that he slammed him too hard into it before you even wrote about the blood
While eating: Always comparing Sasuke to Orochimaru. I would have snapped much earlier and poured the green tea in Jiraiya's face.
Man, Sasuke is really not beating around the bush when he said he doesn't like Sai. I can feel with him there. ^^
I loved the scenes during the movie! Mega lol. They were just too funny.
Omg, when Naruto suggested to go fishing. Just the thought of Jiraiya and Sasuke sitting in a boat in the middle of a lake with Hawaiian shirt and hats on... not good.
Man, the laser tag, if I would be in a passageway with Ino, horror!
Poor Sasuke, always getting chased by fangirls. *glomping him*


To the story in general: I loved it! It was one of the best stories I have ever read, the descriptions of the characters, feelings ecc. was just great. Never give up on writing fanfiction!!
*Goes straight to favs*
I could keep on ranting for another two hours (by the way, he ate the picture?!?!?! WTF!!) but this review is slowly turning into a story itself.
Again, great job on this story!
Love, Andi
*huggs*