wow, great opening chapter! really really good. i hope logans okay!
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I can't believe it.

(I blink as I scroll the reviews.)

This is one of the first stories I read way back when I first went looking for 'Dark Angel' on the Internet - and I never reviewed.

(I blink again.)

I am horrified.

When you mentioned it the other day and I reconnected it with *you*, I had to read it again. Thoroughly enjoyable! A wonderful mix of action and mystery with touches of friendship...

... and Max wondering if there is anything more to her relationship with Logan. Her worry and detective work are super to read through and you have her 'voice' down pat. I liked the plot of the community centre i.e. not actually being an emergency situation after all, and encountering Marianne again was a very nice touch. A shame we didn't see more of her or Bennett in the series.

It's a tight story that made me wish there was a sequel because they are finally starting to deal with the idea of being *together*. :)

Kyre, I know the Muse is difficult to rouse sometimes and finding the time to get the ideas down can be tricky, too, but *please* write more DA stories. You write in this universe very well and authors are hard pressed to keep M/L fandom fed... ;)

Speaking of food, I will give you chocolate if you write more frequently! :D

Cheers!
Mouse :)

What a great story! Very Max to be so worried about him. Glad Logan was okay and everything turned out right!

I enjoyed it. My only criticism is that I don't think Logan would be working on an architechtural project. He seems more aggressive in his causes. Well written otherwise, good work.

That was so sweet. Your stories have such an endearing quality to them and such wonderful writing. You make a reviewer's job easy. I generally don't like leaving short reviews, but when I have nothing to criticize and only a great, well written story, it's hard to write a long review without sounding overly gushing. Hope to see more of your work.

kool story forgot to review though

SWEET!

i liked this it was really cute

Awwwwwww this was so cute!!!!
I LOVED the "Just a friend wouldn't say that. At least not while slobbering" line!!!!! *G* Adorable *S*

This is a sweet vignette. Very simple and neat. Sometimes, instead of having a big, crazy adventure, it's nice to have a graceful story fleshing out the day-to-day existence of our intrepid heros.
I thought you did a good job with Max's internal dialogue. Thanks for writing it.

Loved it all, but chapter 4 well.... The swim, the kiss, the hidden meanings - very nicely done. How about another pool orientated fic? Please?

I really like this, particularly how you've brought in Bennett and Marianne. Could do with some more of those two. How's your other fanfic coming? Are we going to have something more soon.

::happy sigh:: yes, yes and yes. Shippy in all the right ways. Happy and cheeky and still with some intelligence. Oh, and images of wet Logan never hurt either ;)

Cute! Seems like the sort of philanthropy Logan would be involved in.

Hey Kyre I just finished your fic and it ROCKED! I loved it sooo much and I almost started crying it was that sweet. You have to write another fic for me! Luv Penny