 alecatjr 2009-12-09 . chapter 39I just came across this story and have been glued to it! I just finished and I NEED MORE! Please, please, please update it! I'm hooked! Thanks and please keep going! |
 Fruitypops 2009-12-08 . chapter 14I Love this Story . |
 rikish10 2009-11-29 . chapter 39All right...How to begin...? I found this a while back, but unfortunately I didn't get to read it. This past week I remembered it and decided it was time. All I can say is that I've been totally glued to the screen, to the total dismay of my family. This is extraordinary! I find the way you depict the emotion, the longing and Edward's caring nature to be absolutely amazing! No wonder you received all these awards and nominations! I was happy to see how you dealt with Bella's bad choices, errors of judgement and the way they had to overcome them. You are on my alerts because I can't even imagine not continuing with this intoxicating story. I understand you want to finish the story before posting again, but just remember we're waiting on pins and needles. I mean after all how can we go on without the visual of Edward in the shower and the possibility of him getting his hair washed?! But joking aside, I hope you post soon, so we can enjoy more quality time with Edward and Bella. |
 NorwegianEdwardLover 2009-11-28 . chapter 39Wow! =D I simply love your story! I've been sitting glued to the computer the last three days, reading this story!
I really hope you'll get the story done =D Are you going to write about the wedding and after?? =D
Good luck! :) |
 helbaffy 2009-11-26 . chapter 39Where do you come up with this staff?...
I just LOVE this story!
Please, please update ASAP! ...:) |
 soton 2009-11-23 . chapter 37Really love this story. You capture all of the passion between Edward and Bella in such a honest, pure and thoughtful way.
I hope that you will find a way to continue with this wonderful story - please? :P |
 katjakatt 2009-11-17 . chapter 39i love this story. you've packed so much action, love and tenderness into such a short period of time. i can't wait to see what happens next. and i love the way they're communicating. |
 helbaffy 2009-11-17 . chapter 25I simply can't get enough of this story! :) It is so amazing... definitely the most romantic fanfic of Twilight arc... Love this story! :) |
 RedSaucy 2009-11-16 . chapter 20Hey C!
I'm reviewing out of order but there were just so many things in this chapter...
"Charlie was not much better as a parental role model, either, although I knew better than to try and criticize him in front of her. Bella had to do the shopping and cooking for him; she was a good housekeeper, taking pride in keeping Charlie well fed and content. Again, she had to be the mature adult instead of the carefree teenager he should have allowed her to be.
As a father he was woefully lacking in my considered opinion."
"I cringed every time I saw Bella grab her keys and head for that ancient, red deathtrap Charlie had given her."
"Charlie was also blissfully unaware of most of her activities, dangerous as they might be, and instead of concerning himself with her welfare he was busy trying to push her into a relationship with a werewolf. The fact that a vampire shared his daughter’s bed every night had completely escaped his powers of observation."
"His overreaction to the announcement of our marriage, accusing her of being pregnant, had been beyond the pale...He didn't know her at all; this shouldn't have surprised me, but it did."
"When I left Bella broken and frantic her parents had not been able to help her. I had seen the aftereffects of her nightmares through Charlie’s mind; the way she woke him out of a sound sleep by shrieking my name with such pain in her voice. At first he would rush in and try to comfort her, but upon finding her curled up in the fetal position, sobbing, obviously dying inside, he allowed himself to be overwhelmed and merely stood, unable to ease her pain.
He just let Bella suffer without any physical contact and I knew this hurt her even more."
"That mongrel provided the duct tape for her soul"
I'm just going to THIS! all of those quotations. I could not agree more.
Also, nice observation on Edward also hating the truck because it came from the Blacks. I had never, ever considered it.
This story is intriguing. I'll admit to getting a little bogged down in Edward's emo stuff but it's so him. |
 mscope 2009-11-09 . chapter 3The purity of Edward and Bella's love shine in this story. As if that is not great enough you've added little bits of humor that inspire the reader to go on.
The reference about dismembering Jasper and lighting the match himself did indeed make me laugh. I will definitely check out Mandi1's story.
Hopefully I can get through another 3 chapters tomorrow.
Sandra |
 mscope 2009-11-09 . chapter 2I love the romantic flair of this story. And couldn't not help but giggle when Edward asked if she was trying to dazzle him.
So far this story stirs my heart.
Sandra |
 soton 2009-11-09 . chapter 39Hey another very enjoyable chapter. Bella is pushing Edward so hard (and who can blame her ;D) and Edward is fightng not to harm her.
A bit confused - what has happened with the rest of the story? |
 mscope 2009-11-09 . chapter 1As I cleaned out my story alerts over the weekend I came across Blue Moon Over Manka's. I do not have to tell you that this story has always been so highly recommended and I decided finished or not I would read the story. Can you imagine the squee I made when I read your profile and saw that you have every intention of completing this story. So it is going to take awhile to read straight through but I am going to do it.
I just finished the first chapter. The letter Edward leaves for Bella while he is out hunting should be in book of love letters for it is truly beautiful.
Looking forward to reading more as time allows.
Sandra |
 shamito 2009-11-09 . chapter 39more...more...more... i stopped myself from giving a review while reading this fanfiction because i cant seem to stop reading it..and that leaves me no time in giving a review...you did a fantastic job in making this story...explaining the time when Bela fell in love with jacob..i understood now..how she did it...i guess while reading this its like peeping into stephenie meyer's mind...perfect story...one of the best post eclipse fanfiction story ever made...i hope you can write more about this especially the wedding, and the honeymoon..and maybe the conversion of bella into vampire...i'm awaiting for your next chapters..hoping that it wont be long before i get to read chapter 40 onwards...good luck and god bless!! |
 soton 2009-11-08 . chapter 36OMG that was beautiful! :D |