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| LiTTleMiSSmOOny 2008-02-24 ch 2,  | abuseBoth of these stories were amazing. I seemed to have liked the Brennan getting shot one more though. If only because it was such a gut instinct for her to fling herself upon Booth to protect him. Very out of character but oh so in character for her. Terrific job. |
| Cindy 2008-02-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think that the beginning sounds like an excerpt from Bones: Buried Deep. It's extremely similar to the part where Brennan got beat up and the bad guys got away, then she woke up in the hospital to find monitors hooked up to her and Booth sleeping in a chair next to her. |
| Sarah9488 2008-02-10 ch 2, | abuseLiked both equally, couldn't really decide. But this only shows how alike they are even though they always think they are so different. |
| danireed 2008-02-10 ch 2, | abusethis was agood chapter but i really liked the first one where Booth got shot. it was better. |
| daisy07 2008-02-10 ch 2, | abuseVery moving - and exactly how I would imagine Brennan would (not)cope with being reliant on others. I think your Booth story just had a slight edge - mainly because I like the thought of Booth being the one in need of love and care for a change - after all he is, in general, the one who spends a greal deal of his time looking out for Brennan. Thank you. |
| b0nes lover 2008-02-10 ch 2, anon. | abusei like the one where brennan was shot best, because just her having to be taken care of is different, and i think that it was very sweet how booth took care of her:):D both were great though:) |
| mishma 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abusethis is so hard! I can't decide! haha uhm, let me think...I think I liked the first one better... I like when Booth protects her, but this doesn't mean that I didn't like the second one, it was damned good too! Brennan shielding Booth...nice! :D nice job! |
| saragillie 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseI liked the second one better. It worked well both ways. :-) |
| fanofbones 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseI loved both of them...but Protector is my favorite. I don't think it would occur to Bren to shield Booth. I could see her shooting her way out or yelling a warning and then both ducking for cover. Call me old fashioned, but I see Booth as the one to shield her. Sorry. Both were excellent. hugs fab |
| prinny2310 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseAnother great story Red! I think I liked the first chapter better, just because it seems more realistic that Booth would protect Brennan. They were both very interesting chapters and I look forward to reading more soon. How are you going with "A Mother's Secret"? Hopefully there will be a new chapter soon! |
| Sweet LIL loz 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseyeay very clever |
| the psycho sour skittle 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abusebetter? personaly the first one...But I did like this one too. |
| fortune kookie 91 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseI'm not really sure which one I like better, they're both so good! And I loved them both! Bye ;) Su |
| official-squint 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abusehey, good story i enjoyed it! i think i liked Booths concern better but the kiss better when Booth was the one injured!! well done |
| She Who Shall Go Nameless 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseAw...I like them both. Nice work! |