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| Michelle UK 2008-02-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat Ending Loved it |
| OEJS 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was good, I liked how you used parts of the songs for the beginning of the chapter and the song as the title. I LOVE REBA and JAG |
| jagfanNIKKI 2008-02-11 ch 4, | abuseaww thats soo cute .. pls continue! |
| Jitka 2008-02-11 ch 4, | abuseI think one more chapter, begining on the events of last night, redone a little much :o) |
| starryeyes10 2008-02-11 ch 4, | abusegreat story |
| VA Dixie Girl 2008-02-11 ch 4, | abusethis is good story...you could add a chapter or leave it doesnt maatter...great ending |
| michelle UK 2008-02-10 ch 3, | abuseHope Mac doesn't feel rejected as she has taken Harm by surprise, to bad Renee was there.With Mic gone can you get rid of Renee? Didn't mean to upset you. All i meant, is when a chapter is so short, you can't get into the story! |
| michelle UK 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abuseHate these short chapters |
| CD 2008-02-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseWhat a new idea. Looking forwad to the next chapter. |
| starryeyes10 2008-02-09 ch 2, | abusegreat story |
| Modiamonds 2008-02-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseI love your fanfic! You have combined two of my favorite subjects in the whole world. You have a really good grasp on what Mac was thinking. Bravo! |
| michelle UK 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseIndeed i do even more so with Bugme out of the picture( well i hope so)? Hurry and update ASAP!! |
| žíží 2008-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, it's the first story I... you made me review :D This is great. Can't wait for more, I hope Harm will do what he couldn't!! Thank you and update soon, please! |