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| MarySai3 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abuse*sniff* *sniff*...AW! very KAWAI story! i loved it, Sakura has got the GUTS!! YEAH!! CHA!! lol |
| Kaira-chan15 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseOne word. Amazing! ^_^ I absolutely loved this! It was so very well written and I enjoyed every second of it! I honestly can't think of something that you could improve on! The lyrics go perfectly with everything, too. This part was my fav, cuz I think she actually feels that way: Deep down, Sasuke I’m relieved that you left. If you hadn’t left, I wouldn’t have had the determination or nerve to improve. It’s kind of like how if Orochimaru hadn’t killed the Third, I wouldn’t have met Tsunade. The whole concept of cause and effect is sick and cruel, but sadly it’s life. This part was also good: He still believes that if you ever come back we can be team seven again. He still thinks that you’re the same Sasuke-teme and maybe you are, but one thing you can count on is, I am not going to be that Sakura-chan. Very nice job, this is definately going on my favorite's list! ^_^ |
| angelofblue 2008-06-08 ch 1, | abusewow, that was really good! I liked it alot! |
| YenGirl 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusePoor Sakura, this is so sad! But yes, she's going to get on with her life, that's good! The song really fits well though, good job! |
| Bubba Kush 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseyou just got me to read a Sakura story...and like it! that's an amazing feat! i really dont like Sakura but im okay with her character in shippuden...it was mostly and i quote u the 'Sakura-chan' that was all goo goo gaa gaa for Sasuke i give you props for making me, me! > like Sakura! -lzkit -)(- hahaha i made itachi |
| i.dance.in.the.rain 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseDEAR CRANES, I like! Really impressive for your first Naruto fic! -claps- I like those last lines - they hit very hard. Thank YOU. Oh, irony. C: I know there were a few punctuation mistakes, but I love how Sakura, in her POV, rambles on about the bittersweet relationship she has with Sasuke in the anime/manga. Very realistic! I would also love it if you would do me the favor of checking out my own Naruto fics - 'Beauty&theBeast' and 'TheNannyDiaries' (cue puppy eyes) Anyway, good luck with your own writing! I look forward to seeing more. LOVE,SYDNEY |
| xoxo-besties-xoxo 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseomg, it's so sad. i love the way sakura changes though, its so good! loving it so much. |
| Cherrysinger 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI sorta wish this had more writing, because most of it is lyrics and that just doesn't usually appeal to me, because this is first and foremost a story, but overall good job for your first piece. |
| Capitulate 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Absolutely the definition of bittersweet. The ending definitely stung like a punch. =3 For your first fanfic, this was excellent, honestly. Probably, truthfully, the best songfic I ever read. The song fit the story well, and usually I abhor songfics, but I really, really liked this one. By all means, keep writing fics, you have so much potential brimming in you, I'm certain. Good luck in the future. =3 Cheers! |