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James Birdsong
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Heh ^.^
Hooray.
SomeAnonReader
2008-10-30 . chapter 1
It was a cute/funny fic.

The gum mystery fits Maya really well.

Good job!
princessphilomena
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
Very cute - I love how you captured Nick and Maya so well!
I hope to see more from you!
imp4ever
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
aw, cute little maya/phoenix fluff! love the little zelda easter egg at the end ^_^
Storm Parakaitz
2008-03-30 . chapter 1
This was adorable, so well done :3 I can totally picture this happening in the games.

"Uh oh. She’s actually learning from her boss. That’s actually really not good. At all."
Yeah yeah Phoenix, we know you're a kleptomaniac too XD
Geoutlit
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
Good story overall. I can see this scene happining in the game. Charecters (sorry cant spell) stay true to there in game selfs.
Yerocha
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
Yes, when Phoenix and Maya interact outside of work, I would suspect it's something like this. Nicely written and well in keeping with the style of the game.
Sapphire Rose E.
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
henhenhen so cute! thanks for writing
purrpickle
2008-02-27 . chapter 1
Hee hee. That was cute! I can just see Phoenix's 'devil' persona popping up on his shoulder and teasing him. >^_^<

Keep up the good work!
-purrpickle
j
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
aw... cute!

Their dialogue is very true to the game, I liked that alot.
Well written and it leaves me wanting more to the story!
Toby Danger
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
Just adorable. Maya in full-on daffy mode is too cute for words, and it's nice to see Phoenix adnowledge how different she looks in her non-medium clothes The subtle hints at romance were also well placed. Good fun, I really enjoyed this.
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