 James Birdsong 2009-01-05 . chapter 1 Heh ^.^
Hooray. |
 SomeAnonReader 2008-10-30 . chapter 1 It was a cute/funny fic.
The gum mystery fits Maya really well.
Good job! |
 princessphilomena 2008-10-14 . chapter 1Very cute - I love how you captured Nick and Maya so well!
I hope to see more from you! |
 imp4ever 2008-10-13 . chapter 1aw, cute little maya/phoenix fluff! love the little zelda easter egg at the end ^_^ |
 Storm Parakaitz 2008-03-30 . chapter 1This was adorable, so well done :3 I can totally picture this happening in the games.
"Uh oh. She’s actually learning from her boss. That’s actually really not good. At all."
Yeah yeah Phoenix, we know you're a kleptomaniac too XD |
 Geoutlit 2008-03-23 . chapter 1Good story overall. I can see this scene happining in the game. Charecters (sorry cant spell) stay true to there in game selfs. |
 Yerocha 2008-03-15 . chapter 1Yes, when Phoenix and Maya interact outside of work, I would suspect it's something like this. Nicely written and well in keeping with the style of the game. |
 Sapphire Rose E. 2008-03-09 . chapter 1henhenhen so cute! thanks for writing |
 purrpickle 2008-02-27 . chapter 1Hee hee. That was cute! I can just see Phoenix's 'devil' persona popping up on his shoulder and teasing him. >^_^<
Keep up the good work!
-purrpickle |
 j 2008-02-08 . chapter 1 aw... cute!
Their dialogue is very true to the game, I liked that alot.
Well written and it leaves me wanting more to the story! |
 Toby Danger 2008-02-08 . chapter 1Just adorable. Maya in full-on daffy mode is too cute for words, and it's nice to see Phoenix adnowledge how different she looks in her non-medium clothes The subtle hints at romance were also well placed. Good fun, I really enjoyed this. |