What can she do for me? Let’s see...there are many possible answers to that question. Ninety percent of them have nothing to with American football.
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Lolz!

I really really enjoyed this fic!

I hope you continue this, it's waay good

Poor Hiruma, being in a lot of pain brings out the real him.

"If I wasn't hurting so bad, I'd have a **"

Best line. LOL

Awesome fic~

ARGGH...! Hurry, continue the story...!! I can't wait! It's just too real! Like.. it is what he's thinking!

OH GODDAMMIT, it makes me curious!

PS: I like the story line, it feels so real! Good work! :)

I finally got around to reading this! Go me! Or more like go you! This was...no IS an awsome read. I am sorely tempted to go and read it again, and I think I will.

My favorite line..."She even said the f-word. With distinct emphasis. If I wasn't hurting so bad, I'd have a **." That is really something a guy would honestly think...especially a guy *cough*demon*cough* like Hiruma-kun. I am amazed at how well you pegged a guy's personality...but I suppose dealing with Tasuki all the time gave you a lot of practice. ^^;;

I look foreword to reading the next part, whenever your scheduale let's you have time to work on it! ^_^

Much Love,

BlackHawk

i applaud you! really brave to write in hiruma's voice...he never shows his real face so its hard

C: Yum.

i hope you continue this one soon

Only have a minute, then back to work. :-)
Much different than your other stuff, but I like it. Talk about character immersion- reading this made me feel like the character is talking straight to me. You've written from a guy's pov, and you got it exactly right.

Great job. Write more.

your lovin' Bandit
;-D

You are an effing great writer! Can't wait for more!

i felt so pumped up, i another way. very well-done! please keep it up!

you're good... you're really good... hihi update soon, sooner than I think, hehehe I want to know the whole part of this fic...

I love it!
Please update soon!

Just to let you know, I've been bitting my sleeve for the whole ten minutes that I read this so that I didn't squeal. It's amazing! We're IN Hiruma's HEAD. =D You've captured his thoughts perfectly... XD You're amazing...