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| Midnight Blue Raven 2008-09-16 ch 26, | abuseWell, let me tell you that I've always been against Incest and hated Angst. But you totally changed my mind on those 2 subjects. :) I love the way how Gaara pretended to be emotionless and all despite being vulnerable and caring. It was not nice of him to make Temari bleed that much but at least that got them close. And I freakin' hate Gaara's father now. Damn, stupid man! Anyways, I'm not sure if I'm going to read the 2nd part though. Since I tend to lose interest in a fic if the plot becomes stretched and the fic becomes too long. But I'll try though. :) Also, I'm a new fan of Naruto ANime. But I've been thinking of writing a fic. The main character will probably be an OC and I'm not sure yet who I want her to end up with; Kakashi or Gaara. I hope you'll come by and leave a comment when I post it up. -raven. |
| jenthehedgehog 2008-08-24 ch 26, | abuseId just like to say, this is the first Naruto fanfiction I have read and I was just mesmerised by it all. This is the best fanfic that I have read in my life, and I want to say thank you for writing it. It also makes me want to write something now, even if its just short, to try and compete with your obvious writing talent which I probably can't. So extremely well done! |
| Venom 2008-08-20 ch 13, anon. | abuseok first thing i want to say doesnt have anything to do with the story...im practiclly being commanded to review and i have know clue why im still going to after...ermm...nvm. ok i like the story..really..some parts of it get a little...weird..but oh well they make the story what it is...which is good... the whole story is just interesting..fun to read.. |
| kittyzero 2008-08-08 ch 26, | abusebeautiful. you're an amazing writer! |
| kittyzero 2008-08-08 ch 25, | abuse-shrieks- amazingness! i love this story... -wipes tear away from corner of eye- |
| kittyzero 2008-08-08 ch 24, | abuseOh, my effing geebus! no! i'm crying holy...wow! |
| kittyzero 2008-08-07 ch 17, | abuseif not about the blood...then what? i must know haha i should keep on reading then lovely chapter i'm so hooked! i had dreams about your story last night |
| kittyzero 2008-08-07 ch 16, | abuseDANG! awesomeness. |
| kittyzero 2008-08-07 ch 6, | abuseoddly beautiful... i'm crying! haha i love this story |
| kittyzero 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abusebarely the first chapter and already i love this story it's mind-blowingly amazing the way things are worded and described i love it! |
| slack-jawed cheese hugger 2008-07-23 ch 24, | abuseA cloud hangs over, this city by the sea, I watch the ships pass and wonder if she might be, Out there and sober as well from loneliness, Please do persist girl it's time we met and made a mess I picture your face in the back of my eyes, A fire in the attic, a proof of the prize, anna-molly, anomaly, anna-molly A cloud hangs over, And mutes my happiness, A thousand ships couldn't sail me back from distress, Wish you were here, I'm a wounded satellite, I need you now put me back together make me right I picture your face in the back of my eyes, A fire in the attic, proof of the prize, anomaly, anna molly, anomaly, I'm calling your name, up into the air, Not one of the others could ever compare, anna-molly, anomaly Wait there is a light, There is a fire illuminated attic, Fate or something better I couldn't care less, Just stay with me a while, Wait there is a light, there is a fire, Defragmenting the attic, Fate or something better I could care less, Just stay with me a while -anna molly incubus |
| wasabi bean queen midori 2008-07-22 ch 26, | abusePrepare for a long review: (Midori bows down to LifeLikeDoll) ALL HAIL THE QUEEN OF LEMONS...NO...THE GODDESS OF LEMONS! This story was awesome, I loved that scene in the last chapter, so cool how Gaara ends up letting Temari know that he cares! You did a great job of really delving into Gaara's mind and how he thinks, your interpretation of Gaara's character was one of the best yet in my opinion, though his sadistic side always scares me... I got a little creeped out when I figured out that this story takes place before the chunin exams so Gaara must be...12 to 13 years old? Wow...he sure is very, erm, knowledgable for a boy his age, but with a perverted raccoon living inside him I guess it makes sense! |
| My Review Account 2008-07-21 ch 26, | abuseA continuation!? Must resist... urge... to KILL! *sigh* If the story isn't over then please don't list it as "Complete", if I'd known I wouldn't have started reading it. |
| sesshomari 2008-07-08 ch 26, | abusePretty awesome. I really don't know what brought me to reading a Temari and Gaara story, but it's actually very good. I will be reading part 2. ~!*sesshomari*!~ |
| Mika 2008-07-07 ch 26, anon. | abuseI'm going insane. When are you updating? It's Monday of the following week. TT_TT I am horrible at being patient. It's such a good story-you've gotten me hooked. And to think it's on a pairing that I would have never read if it weren't for this fic. Gah, please update. I feel like I'm losing my mind. |