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| tuatara 2008-08-20 ch 46,  | abuseAs it's been a while since I last commented, I just wanted to applaud you on how well this story has come along. I really like the episodic structure it's taken on, where we check in with a group or two in each chapter. More specifically, I'm really intrigued by the direction you've gone with the Apareis. I'm also quite pleased to see Galleom appear! (Not to mention Toon Link!) A few details have thrown me now and then, but of course that'll happen with this many chapters. Overall, this is easily one of my favorite pieces of fan fiction (be it EVA, SSB or anything else). It's just such a fun story with so many clever pairings and plot twists. I will be quite sad when this story comes to an end! Thank you for this fantastic tale. PS: Kudos to the guest author on the Maya segments! Great characterization. PPS: Tabuu and Keel Lorenz - any chance? If you don't have plans for them already, consider this a request! (I'm sending you a message with my silly idea that I'm very proud of.) |
| animefan29 2008-08-19 ch 46, | abuseI find it interesting how you have taken to really exploring your characters' personalities and feeling in these chapters. |
| animefan29 2008-08-14 ch 45, | abuseGalleom? Never heard of it. Talks a little like the Hulk. Can't wait to see the fight between the hedgehogs and Naoko. Sonic should give her a bit of trouble but the real heavy hitter there will be Shadow. |
| Not-Going-To-Tell 2008-08-13 ch 44, | abuseDecent so far, but just a quick review. Dialga: Diamond, Time Palkia: Pearl, Space. Seems it's been confused a bit recently. |
| animefan29 2008-08-13 ch 44, | abuseHm...Your planning something with the Apareis. If this was simply character development you would not have taken it this far. But to put this much focus on them means you are going to do something that will surprise everyone. Also I wonder what would happen if the Apareis found out they had a ' big brother' as well as a big sister. Also I am looking forward to the bits involving snake, even though I am not very familiar with Metal Gear Solid. |
| Dookie Overlord 2008-08-10 ch 43, | abuseI hate that guy... (Gendo) |
| animefan29 2008-08-09 ch 43, | abuseWell this was an interesting chapter from the veiw of the new aparoids. |
| animefan29 2008-08-06 ch 42, | abuseArgorok? Not familiar with that one. Wonder what game he's from. I also really enjoyed the character Neelson. You got to love the old bar informer who loves a bar fight. And nice bit with Shinji. It was both cool and funny. Pure gold. |
| Dookie Overlord 2008-08-06 ch 42, | abuseEverybody loves a good bar-fight |
| animefan29 2008-08-05 ch 41, | abuseWell that is not good. If Dialga is on the side of the subspace council and no one knows it then he can cause a lot of trouble (more then what he has already caused). |
| animefan29 2008-08-01 ch 40, | abuseIS JIGGLYPUFF LILITH!?!?! The chapter was great but the possible revelation really overshadows everything else. Although the bit of humor comes close. |
| Dookie Overlord 2008-07-30 ch 39, | abuseWell that was enlightening |
| animefan29 2008-07-30 ch 39, | abuseWell I found that fight entertaining. I have to wonder how the hedgehogs are going to face down Kraid. |
| animefan29 2008-07-23 ch 38, | abuseWell that explaination was wonderful, and enlightning. Can't wait for more. |
| Dookie Overlord 2008-07-23 ch 38, | abuseRidley's here. Not good. |