I can't wait for the next chapter

Hmpf! Wonderful, now you left us at this point! It's really not nice but still, I'm really glad to have read so much from you this evening. Your story is wonderful, well thought-out and the few characters that really have a speaking role are all plausible and, even more important, likable.
I was also surprised to read that Lucius really looks ragged ... I certainly didn't think of it while he was wandering about. But having some other character point that out it becomes glaringly obvious that Lucius has been overtaxing himself severely and repeatedly and still he's going on and on. I'm sure it has to do with "being blessed" as Shinobu put it, and it doesn't take three guesses that his blessing's name starts with an H and ends with arry. XD

Mo, I love your story and really can't wait to read more. Please dont let us wait too long ^_^ Huggles for your wonderful efforts, it's a great pleasure to experience them.

Oho, so Harry got a first whiff of ... something *smirk* Since I know where this story will be genereally heading I won't say too much on the matter - I'm just glad that now I can start chewing my nails for real. Phew. This is so exciting XD

Ugh, girl, you know how I love your way to realistically describe yur scenes, but Greyback's demise was just ... ack. XD Anyway, he deserved it, and so the reader stands a hope that Lucius and Alecto will have better luck, now that they're alone. And I sincerely hope that Lucius will get his bath *lol*

Great chapters so far, I'm on my way to the next one.

Very interesting!!

Aah, a very nice beginning to a story. Until now I didn't have the time to read your newest story but now I did and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. As usual, your writing is excellent and captivating, the characters all very 'in character'. Harry's bitterness is only explained in part (I think the whole story will follow later) but it completely explains his reactions and his character.

I really think that this might become your best work so far (and since I already know some small tidbits that happen later in the story I'm already really salivating for it to continue *g*).

Cheers,
Desde/Morraine

I finally read all your other stories on H/L and love them. Hope you will update this one soon.

I just finished the first chapter.
It is rather dark and foreboding with all the losses and deaths and such, but I actually liked it.
It is well written and a great start to something addictive, like your other LM/HP stories I've read.
I have no idea how you'll manage to bring Lucius together with Harry; that must be a challenge.
I can't wait to see the next chapter.