Absolutely awesome story, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Completely, totally, utterly awesome!

Well, from what I've read in the past couple of days (the entire story thus far) this story is nothing short of amazing! The only complaint that I have is the careless grammatical errors that I catch every now and then, but it doesn't detract from the story so, whatever. I hope that you continue to write this one at this location, as I don't know your deviantART name and such. If you wanna give 'em to me that's cool too.:) Keep up the good work!

-Ultima

Darn, you gotme all excited about an update, then I find out it's just a note! I was like, "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!...darn..." Anyway, all is well. It's an awesome story, and take your time!


Cy

Thanks for the heads up!

Awseome story!

lol this was a great chapter! update soon :)!
i too enjoyed DOTD and i still am (ive beaten it over and over again... the ending gets me every time...) (sniff)

lol i hear they intend to continue the story line so there may be more games on their way... plus ive been hearing about the movie... everywhere i go! lol so much to look forward to...

wow... evil crash... lol haven't seen the little maniac in awhile... and now hes evil... lol lets see what happens...

lol wonder what's goign to happen next? lol well its getting more and more interesting to say the least... lol nice chap

interesting... wth the chronicler is his... dad? thats... oddly... weird... idk lol good chapter though

i loved this chapter! very well done with a nice battle through out the chapter. not much Spyro included in this chapter but still good! keep up the good work!

awesome chapter! the action was real cool, not to graphical but just enough for me to get the picture. all in all well done, alot better than ive ever managed lol. keep up the good work!

lol great chapter, this story is getting even more interesting as i read... and if you think its bad to have an extra long chapter its not. the longer the chapter the better!

this was a pretty good first chapter, very interesting...

hurry up I hate anticipation and anxioty. Please I've seen and read this story alot but I wish it would continue.