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I liked it but it would be better if it had no cell or any dbz stuff in it

good story

Mm.. it looks interesting, but could you please fix the spacing? It's kind of hard to read this way.. .;;

I don't have time to read this now, but the first four lines were *great*! I put you on my faves list so I can get to you later. _ Anyine who seems to love Ken enough to toture him *whistles innocently as Ken glares at her from across the room* has gotta be decsent in my book!