Very well written. you kept to the character very well. poor bird >_>

Aww... Poor Al-kun! I love him so much! Don't cry; it wasn't your fault!

...This is really sad... Poor Al... He'd be so heartbroken...

You capture Al's realization of his transition from a human boy to a powerful suit of metal armor perfectly. Al's innocent attempt to help a baby bird, and his unintentional murder of it, make that realization even more poignant.

Aww poor Al! He's such a sweetheart and has been put through so much, you just have to feel so bad for him sometimes. This is so sad, but so well written...good work!

ZOMG! Poor Alphonse? That's one of the biggest ironies of the series, sweet gentle soul stuck in a weapon of sorts. Love this one.

PS: Al is MINE!