This is so sweet! I'm beginning to adore Sirius and remus as a couple. They're so cute!

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Nice, clever little story. It doesn't matter who "she" is; she's every girl who's ever fallen for the wrong man and knows it.

:O Remmie has a secret admirer! :DD Is it strange that I find all your fics unbelievably cute? :3 I like the light note of angst, too. It's different.

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I'm sure I recognise your pen name? Have you reviewed any of my stories in the past?

Anyway, I was trawling through the rubbish and stumbled across this absolute gem. Short, sweet and to the point. I loved it. So subtle. Wonderful stuff!

One for my favourites!

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i like how you dont name who the "she" is and i really like how you make it open to the fact that she could like either Sirius or Lupin but couldnt have either of them anyway. very well written!

So you support Remus/Sirius slash? :) Me, too.

I like this!

Even though Remus and Sirius can't see how close they are, from an outside perspective it is easy to see they are made for each other.

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"...not when things were so obvious to her, even if they weren't to them."

One of the best lines I've read, EVER. )

There was a missing full stop here: "The laughter was contagious, rippling round the group" and I think that spoiled it a little bit. If you can be bothered, please do change it, because it distracts from how great the piece actually is.

Good story. Well-written, well-thought out, well-designed. I love the anonymosity of the "she", and that line...!

Interesting how you have it form an OC pov. :)

i'm curious as to who the she is? lily, maybe? but i really like this one :]

which one does she like?

sirius or remus?

Nice job, I liked it! Who is the girl, btw? Lily?

Keep up the good work :)