Edward thinks WAY too much.

Very nice choice of song. I enjoyed it very much.

OMG, thnx 4 riting this story!

I LOVED IT! When I read that quote, this is the song I think of... D

aw... i love that song, the first time i heard it i immediately thought of Edward & Bella, and seeing edwards POV with the song almost made me cry! good job

That song is like, one of my favorites in the world. This story went amazing with it, and I really liked it. I loved how Edward described her. I was totally jealous! Haha. It made me want Edward more. (: (I'm a total Bella Hater.) You did GREAT!

There was just one thing. In the paragraph where you were describing the analogy thing, the drug heroin is spelled with no "e". A female hero has the "e". But that was the only thing.

But anyway, that was great. I'm going to read your other one now. (: