omg! tht was awsome!

i loved it! thnx for the awsome story!

peace out!

Alright! she can see again. Awesome. A great end. Short but sweet. And an awesome trilogy. Thanks very much for taking the time to write and post them. They were brilliant.

Dan F

Hey! I just read all of the chapters, and I think it's great! Keep up the good work! BTW, you should check out my story. I 100% guarantee you'll like it!

THATS IT? ITS OVER? NO MORE CHAPTERS? NO! (goes into shock!) you gotta write more about chole! and all of that! please continue! I'll still help! ]

great! I just got caught up from the previous book. sofar its awesome, just dont turn it into that movie where she sees people the are going to die. I'll be sticken' around.

Geez. That's sickening. A Male Gang beating up on a blind female. that's no cool. But I Loved the Bit where Mack came saw and kicked some A**. I literally punched the air at that point *grins* I really enjoyed this Chapter. It was really emotional. I look forward to the next chapter. hope Kaori Gets her sight back. Please cntinue when you can.

Dan F

aw! that was cute! loved how chloe says kari haha great action idea liked that! I'm so glad you FINALLY posted! lol and I'm excited that kaori is going to see again.

AH Chloe thats adorable! she sound cute I wanna kidnap her very cute that she said mac! haha! The bank...scared the crap outta me but atleast every ones alive! ] PLEASE DON'T MAKE KAORI BLIND! then she can't see poor Chloe grow up![ I absolutly loved the chapter and the name! omg! ROCKS! keep postin! ]

Woah... What a Chapter. Awesome. But It's not over? Please continue when you can.

Dan F

Aw, SO cute, I loved it! Is there going to be more?

AH! she preggers haha yey! D anyways I love it and I will help you pick names muhahaha thru email because PM never works for me...ugh! terrible I know write me soon so we can discuss excellent chapter by the way! ]

THAT SO TOTALLY ROCKS! I guess two wrongs do make a right. Appropriate title. That was a heartwarming chapter. I was totally taken by surprise when I found Kaori was pregnant. I hope everything will be okay for them now. Please continue when you can.

Dan F

Oh dear oh dear oh dear... Mundo, MUNDO problemo... He hit Kaori... Ay carumba! This is getting good. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Take your time with it.

Wow. that was a good chapter. i enjoyed the part at the end between MAc and kaori. Very cute. But I wonder If Mac's gonna find out about sid... Another good chapter. Thanks for posting. Please continue when you can.

Dan F

Oh boy... You just know things are not gonna go well. I wonder if Sid is actually gonna have a race with Kaori... Mind you, you described the house very well. You did give me the impression it was luxurious and worth half a million. Kudos to you. Please continue whenever you find the time.

Dan F