I'm impressed. You really put a lot of work into this...

I definatly like this story and how its going...let me tell you...I was really suprised when the Shadow turned out to Umbridge...but it makes this story so much better and I can't wait to read more of this!

This is a very good story and I can't wait to see more of it. I liked how you had it where you could know about the Shadow (good use of Dolores Umbridge's name by the way. I knew Umbra was shadow, etc but not Dolores)

Anyways, I like the idea of Sirius creating a joke shop, and hopefully Fred and George can help him, but I haven't seen Dolores as the main villain of a story before.

Keep up the good work and this is definitely going on my favorite lists

Nice story, it started out really nicely. However it seems to have accelerated drastically. You might want to slow it down a bit and put a little more content into it. The story is still very nice. This acceleration is something that always seems to happen in Time Travel stories. Keep up the excellent work, and I look forward to reading more in the future.

hehe... I think God dislikes your Dumbledore as well...

Another great story of yours! I'm very close to putting you on my fav. authors/author alert list...

Alvahys, alvahys viff ze trunks. Vhy does he alvahys get ze trunks?

waiting for next chapter

This is a brilliant fanfic. I hope you continue this :)

Hi,

This is a really good story, although I did notice somethings that may need explaining.
1. What happened to the Vanishing Cabinet that was at the Granger's house?
2. What happened to the Fiendfyre? Did it just go out once the house was consumed?
3. How did Madam Bones apparate her and Susan onto Hogwarts grounds?
That said, I'm looking forward to reading more :)

Lii

Outstanding story one of the best I've read in a long long time. Most of the stories that you find now have been told a hundred times with just little plot changes. I'm glad that you have started something new. The Time Meddler theme is a old one but you have reinvented it with new plot lines and many more sub-plots that make this one a joy to read. Please keep up the great writing and I hope to read more soon.

Wow I just have to say she is one sick B itch. I mean with all the little kids their. Harry and Hermione better think of one hell of a way to send he to that special place in Hell for that sick freak. LoL. Sorry I'm a Marine that responded to 9/11 because I was walking about 8 blocks away. So you know were I'm coming from I've seen way to much of attacks like the one that you wrote about just not involving screaming plants. Great story keep it up.

I meant to say this a chapter or two back, but forgot about it when I reached the end of the chapter. If a witch or wizard isn't going to use their magic it will explode out of them whenever they have a rather strong emotion which could be deadly to anyone around them. This is shown in book seven when the yunger Dumbledor is talking about his dead sister and how his mother died. So it is really bad that the girl who saw Dumbledor's body isn't going to be taught how to control her magic. Can't wait for the next chapter, hope to see it soon.

If my guess is right, you've kept us waiting for 20 chapters for that damn name. Then you go and do that? You are ** cruel! I do enjoy the story though. Thanks for writing it and even more for posting it.

I was going to mention that in the first chapter you posted for this fic that you told us that Hary could no longer talk to snakes, but then you covered that point so just ignore this review.