Cool.

You write well, but you can't write a decent review.

Hmm...that's fishy. Ain't it?

I like where this story has gone so far. You should update.

You read my story, and I couldn't resist reading yours... AND IT'S FANTASTIC!! XD I love it. Absolutely amazing.

For some reason, I keep thinking that 'Arson' is Warren... with the whole fire thing... Maybe. Idunno. >_

I like either options, I think this could be a really good story

I like your fic. Please, don't leave it!

FREAKING AWESOME!
i laugh

LANGUAGE!
ENGLISH!

poke
go away
poke
go away
poke
go away
poke
go away
poke
PEACE OF!(dane cook) (L)

WONDERFUL!! I love how ur making arson actually have feelings! Idk which i would have her get together with...Im a big fan of Warren but i think Arson has potential...Update soon!

This is so interesting, I love it.
Can't wait to see what happens next so update soon!

As for your other story, I was like...SKY HIGH BASED ON TWILIGHT! when i read the drugs and suns part. It's a really good story so far and I hope you update that one too!

I'm thinking Warren, but couldn't you make so that they were somehow the same person? Because he seems to be a lot like Warren, not just the pyro thing. And maybe get someone to look over the chapters, there are a lot of misspelled words that spell check didn't get because they sound the same. Example, the word is allowed (permission), not aloud (sound).

Yes I am back. Everyone past here is thanked in the third chapter

ANOUCEMENT FROM AUTHOR: This story is on hold because my computer broke. I have the second chapter on the computer and I need a new mother board to get my computer to work. The computer I'm useing now is crap. There is no microsoft word, hell the isn't even a CD drive on the thing. I also don't want to embaress my self with spelling mistakes and other stuff. Sorry peoples.

Update. Now. I demand it.

her power is a lot lik kimimaru's power from naruto. he his awsome. good story keep writing.

i like this one better, dont get me wrong , the other was good, but this ones easier to follow.