haha, sora was right!

Okay, so I found this a while ago, but had to sign off before I reviewed it (tear). So, here it goes.

YAY! AkuRoku love will always prevail!

:)

It was really cute at the end, and the beginning, and the middle, and I /loved/ Roxas's ideas about Valentine's Day (mostly because I share them, but w/e, right?).

Other than being really cute, it stayed on my mind because I didn't have to go up to my friend and be like, "oh, yeah, that was an okay plot, but they destroyed it by not knowing grammar what-so-ever." So, you get major bonus points for that.

lol. Axel "Heart." That made my day (both times I've read it).

All in all, it's favorited. And, I'm pretty tough on what goes on my fav list, so I'm not just telling you this to say stuff.

~Cyhyr

axel a professor? yey, i wanna go to that university! XD just kidding. this story is sweet! too bad it already ended. :)

Interesting piece =] there are a few things I'd like to point out:

Firstly, you need to correct some of your grammar. Like "Riku got you something even!", it's probably better if you say "[even] Riku got you something!" And in "Because I don’t really feel like teaching that much today we will have a short class", you wrote it the other way around. I felt like Yoda was talking XD (he talks like that, flipping the whole sentence structure around) "[We will have a short class today] because I don't really feel like teaching that much" would be better. =) There were also a few spelling mistakes. They weren't so bad, but sometimes it just confuses the reader especially if it's things like "whole" and "while" because both of them are words but they have completely different meanings.

Secondly, the ending... I don't know if you were satisfied with it, but I felt that it was just a little too rushed. Like "Oh!, all of a sudden they're making out!" There could've been more thought into it instead of just simply making them make out and stuff.

But the great thing about this was Roxas' essay. XD It's actually really true considering that this situation is severe in Japan. I personally agree to parts of his essay, although I believe there are still people who truly use this holiday as a special dedication to their significant others. (but if a person is a good lover, then everyday should be Valentine's Day, shouldn't it? XP)

well seems like I have a lot of opinions ^^; well here's your review! I enjoyed this story ^v^

Yay for the defeated writer's block! Or perhaps... you should have them more often--stories like this would be worth it!!

*hugs*

HyperFriend

o.o Hot. I like Roxy's little speech. Amusing. :] Guess Axel proved
him all wrong. heh.



cute fic.