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hikari_birdy
2009-09-15 . chapter 12
A very good Story, maybe a bit fast in the end but still one of the better GW FFs
I am looking forward to your next FF.
PS: I have been reading your other Storys on other HPs you have a bunch of very nice work out there ^^/
Shinigami-chan
2009-06-18 . chapter 12
awe. it's so sweet! i loved this story!
Anon
2009-02-10 . chapter 3
“I hate to break it to you, Duo, but you were the one who walked away.”

I guess this is what I dislike about this story. There is a lot of blame being pinned on Duo for their suggestion. They should know the connotations of 'taking a break' but no, it's his fault, for quitting while he was ahead. There's a lot of unfairness and biasism on the part of their 'friends'. Quatre in particular is irritating me. Sorry but I dont thinking I'll be carrying on with reading this.
TheOneThatIsAddictedToHPfics
2008-11-19 . chapter 12
Loved it!
getaiyou
2008-11-11 . chapter 12
OMG!! I have never before, read something that made me so annoyed. Seriously. The constant running, the same problem coming up over and over again. The fact that he JUST KEEP RUNNING. It's infuriate me so much. And then Heero was just plain stupid.

But I really do like it. Even though it annoys me, it got me hook and I enjoy it somewhat. It still ** me off, though, everything that has happen.

This was like the prime example of going over the top with drama.
Professor Potter-Malfoy
2008-10-16 . chapter 12
Brilliant!
Glomping Kawaii
2008-07-23 . chapter 12
You're definitely a writer! and I wish I were able to write like you, but I guess practice makes perfect. Sorry for the late review! loved it!
yuki
2008-06-08 . chapter 12
Great story! I've read many of your works and they are all good! I wish I have the same talent! lol
scrog
2008-05-30 . chapter 12
I LOVE this story! I've been following it for a while and wanted to let you know that it's one of my favorite of all time! It made me happy and warm on the inside :) I can't wait to see more from you! Keep up the great writing!
waterlilylf
2008-05-30 . chapter 12
Oh, wow...

You totally achieved the impossible in this chapter - you got Duo to stop running, you got the two of them and you got me to like Heero!

Yay, happy ending! This bit was so cute..
And suddenly everything in the past melted away, and all of the heartache, regrets and doubts disappeared. They were together again.

*grins* Sap is good sometimes...sap after angst is wonderful.

Thank you so much for the great story.
spider-jen
2008-05-29 . chapter 12
This was a phenomenal story, really a pleasure to read. The ending was very fulfilling!
Jingying
2008-05-27 . chapter 12
ARH! So perfect! Yay for happy endings! And I did really like it, so hugs to you to. :)
snowdragonct
2008-05-27 . chapter 12
Ah, this chapter was all I hoped it would be.
Assertive Heero is very, very sexy--who wouldn't fall at his feet? And with all the feelings Duo's admitted throughout the story, of course he couldn't resist.
His hesitations and uncertainty are realistic, and yet not insurmountable.
The whole "falling to the floor" part was delicious! A yummy reunion for the two--not sappy at all. (Yeah, later they might have said a sappy word or two...but that's necessary for the happily ever after ending.)
Did I ever mention how much I love happy endings? I think I have. And I thank you for delivering. I almost ran away after the first chapter--it was so heart-wrenching. But I'm glad I toughed out the angst to enjoy the delightful payoff.
Oh, and Jim's little appearance near the end was hilarious, along with Heero's show of jealousy. Sweet. And to think I was starting to dislike Jim along the way--but he proved he's a good friend to Duo, so he redeemed himself. (You definitely showed the clear difference between the sexual compatibility issues between Jim and Duo, and Heero and Duo. Yeah, Duo's gonna be SO happy for the rest of his life!)
So, thanks for a story that made me cry and laugh and want to pound Duo's stubborn head a few times. But then, evoking emotion is the whole point of a story, isn't it? Or at least one of the main points. It'd be a pitiful story that didn't draw some sort of response--and yours just drew all KINDS of responses! It was a fun, fun read! -snow
sunrissa
2008-05-25 . chapter 12
FANTASTIC! This was worth the long w8! I love your GW fiction and this was by far one of the best! :-)
roninlvr
2008-05-23 . chapter 12
Oh wow, when I was reading this story I had a lot of internal commentary! *laughs* When Duo actually did not meet with Heero, I was like 'Come on Duo' I wanted to strangle him!

Then when Heero showed up at Duo's apartment I went 'Way to go Heero!!' Last, when Jim showed up I went 'Oh no! I hope he doesn't cause another problem!' You see when I get really into a story, I tend to get really involved! LOL

I really enjoyed this story and I liked how the two actually discussed what went wrong and why. It was a fantastic ending to a great story. Those 2 definitely belong together. Well done!!

I am also intend to continue reading some of your other stories because I like how you write. I look forward to reading other stories that you do.
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