Reviews for How can you mend a broken heart ?

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gracie 2008-07-01 ch 18, anon.	abuseawesome awesome awesome! I was smiling reading all of that I loved it. I'm so glad she finally said it in the end, made me smile so much. I'm so glad it's not the end I don't think I could deal with no Ally/Larry fic. I'm guessing that you live in America then because the time difference is big, and because you graduated and in the UK we don't graduate. Am i right? Good good I didn't want you to think that I was being impatient and bothering you, I was just concerned that something might have happened because of the long delay with the updating. But it was well worth the wait. I love how Sam doesn't want to go home and how Maddie likes Larry as her dad, and Sam likes Ally as his mum. Update when you can, I think I'm becoming patient lol so take you time. x
Mln 2008-07-01 ch 18, anon.	abuseI know you should be asleep right now, (I hope anyway…) but I cannot wait any longer to CONGRATULATE you on this chapter! It is really WONDERFUL, FORMIDABLE. You were right to take your time to write such a PERFECT chapter where you success to take us through all the possible feelings: interested, shocked (oh Ally you discouraged me) saddened, irritated, hoping, smiling to FINALLY end with our two ending to react right (boys, they were so irritating) and taking the good decisions. It is so tender too and you can feel the love between those two. Thank you so much for this chapter and the happy ending (but not soapy or silly) we were longing to have. I also thank Maddie and Sam to finally have take the situation in hand... Who knows where we would have been if they had not interfere... You were right to take your time to write such a perfect chapter, it worth it. So it is not really the end… okay, but you can take a break now that our fellows are back together, at last. Please take care of you… you know what I mean… I want to thank you to have offered us such a good story, this was great to be back in Ally and Larry's world with you.
Mana-Kipagami 2008-06-24 ch 17,	abuseI've really enjoyed your story so far. I've just now hopped on the Larry/Ally bandwagon (I've been reconnecting with RDJ's work since I saw Iron Man). It's a shame that there isn't more L/A fic out there. I love your reasoning as to why Larry is the way he is and I look forward to future chapters!
gracie 2008-06-19 ch 17, anon.	abuseHow could you leave us with that cliffhanger!!? What a great chapter, I feel sad for Sam he needs his father to tell him that he wants him to stay...Not that he thinks he should be with his mother...Who he obviously hates living with. And I hate Jamie too so well done for the way you've portrayed her in this story! I love how Sam and Maddie are getting along and how sam doesn't really blame Maddie for being part of the family unit sort of thing, because they have so much in common. Cannot wait for the update I think i'll read this chapter again and again (or at least the last few linesl) till chapter 18 is up!! Brilliant keep up the good work...I'm sure you will!!
Mln 2008-06-16 ch 17, anon.	abuseBouh ! You sure are "cruel" to let us in such a interrogation! I can imagine your satisfaction (evil smile…) to have ended the chapter like that letting us wonder. What is going to happen after this first kiss? Is Ally going to finally kiss him back and… or is Larry is going to leave? That so harsh to abandon us in the middle of a sort important scene ! Cannot wait! You really wish Jamie harm, don't you? The choice you make to turn her to be so awful to her child… This is so sad and hurtful to Sam. Poor baby, I understand how he could feel to see how his father and Maddie getting together so well. But please don't send Larry back to Detroit again… It would be one time too much… All this to say how I like this chapter and that you are very good on keeping our attention on hold.
gracie 2008-06-12 ch 16, anon.	abuselove it love it love it love it!! i didn't think i could like this fanfic anymore than i did already but i do, it's amazing! its ok i like the waiting for an update it's all about patience lol. something which i don't have a lot of. i can't wait to read the next chapter!! update when you can x
Mln 2008-06-12 ch 16, anon.	abuseSo it looks that they decide to both act like spoiled and stubborn teenagers, isn't? Fortunately they have a younger one, Maddie, and an elder one, Susan, at their side to think right ! They are going to drive us nuts ! For sure "Sat" you got a lot of tricks in your bag to make us wait… THANKS YOU to have used one of my favorite songs ever… What a wonderful world. It always come in my mind, when a good moment, an unexpected great situation happen. It is such a perfect song for happiness, joy, beauty. This song touch me to the core and I cry and smile and laugh listening it. This is the perfect song for bliss. By the way, OtIS Reading would be had been surprise to be called OtTO… Must be some proximity to...Germany... So chap 17 is on its way… Good girl.
SmileEd 2008-06-11 ch 7,	abusehey... just wanted to say that i love your story. update soon hopeful puppy dog eyes
gracie 2008-06-06 ch 15, anon.	abuseCongratulations on your graduation :) well done! love this fanfic its the best ally and larry one out there. but at the end of each chapter i start craving more!! because your exams are over does this mean that you will be updating more often? cos that would be great as i can't seem to be able to wait a whole 5 days to read the next chapter!!
gracie 2008-06-01 ch 14, anon.	abuseYour right that was well worth the wait. I love how you story contains loads of things I didn't think would happen next, it surprises me but in a good way. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, will he say goodbye or not?? And I can't wait to see how the relationship is going to progress. I love how Ally is so nervous around him and how he is so vulnerable around Maddie and gives things away or tells her stuff. Take your time updating because I really enjoyed this chapter and the length of it, i prefer the longer chapter to a shorter one because there is more to read. But which ever is easiest for you. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Mln 2008-06-01 ch 14, anon.	abuseAah, what a great chapter, full of life, full of details. You perfectly capture the moments between those three. I just love the way you handle Maddie/Larry connection and how subtly you give us the hesitations and interrogations between Ally and Larry. You achieved is a great job in this chapter, really. Too bad, we have to wait now...
Mln 2008-05-27 ch 13, anon.	abuseOh yeah this chapter is so good, so well written, so sharp on the interactions between Ally and Larry. "Satt"… captures with subtlety the hesitations of the two to let give in their relationship, as it is right after a painful break up. I very much like Maddie in this story, she is going to play her part I think and her closeness with Larry is so sweet. Bravo .
gracie 2008-05-26 ch 13, anon.	abuseLove it love it love it, I love the way you've created a barrier between them that neither of them can seem to break down. And how they both want to be more than just friends but can't seem to find the courage to tell the other one, I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. And I loved how long the chapter was it was a great read!! Update when you can x
gracie 2008-05-23 ch 12, anon.	abuseaw i loved this chapter. it was kinda like the parts leading up to them getting involved in the show that we never got to see because they just sort of went from not knowing each other to being in a relationship. i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter i have a feeling it will be the best yet! i'm loving Maddie's character, she really is like Ally and really funny in the parts with Larry/Ally. i love the way you write it, update when you can x
Mln 2008-05-23 ch 12, anon.	abuseHey it just come back to my mind. Did you see W Allen's Manhattan ? The very famous scene (is it the opening scene?) where they are sitting on the bench in the foogy night is shot at Sutton Square and if I am right the black and white poster of the movie figure the Square and the Brigde. Definitively a magical place.

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