I'm so intrigued on this story! I've just read the whole thing so I am going to give you one big review!

OMG! This story is just...whoa. Amazingly good!! I can't believe what's happened to Troy. You had me in tears! Seriously! My mum just came in to ask me what was wrong!! It's just so sad.

That said - i think the ending of this chapter was just cruel! There's a hint that Troy could be gettng his eye sight back, and you left it on a cliffhanger! Which is just plain mean!

YOu so have to update this soon (without meaning to sound rude and demanding :D) but I HAVE to know if Troy is getting his eye sight back! Pleasee!!

Such an amazing story - seriously!

ShineyStar xoxo

loving it
got me hooked!

Wonderful chapter. How do you make me feel sorry for Sharpay after what's she's done? Damnit! I didn't want to feel like that but I do.

I so don't have time for a long review (to the point that I haven't had time to review since I first read it when you posted) but I just wanted to provide the acknowledgement that I read this and really enjoyed it and am looking forward to more because these girls are too bright for their own good :)
-Dani xo

Wow, definitely hope now! I do feel bad for Sharpay and I have to hand it to you that it takes a lot for me to feel bad for a character like her so great job! Can't wait to see what goes on in the upcoming installments!

Hmm interesting...can't wait for more! aww poor sharpay...It makes me sad not to see, or read for that matter, in her lovely pink and sparklingness :)

Update soon : )

Oh exciting! Cant wait for the next one hehe x

o good
Can't wait to find out what it is
UD ASAP!

X x x Alexandra x x X

is it wrong that I feel so bad for Sharpay?
update soon!

Wow! That was excellent Audrey, I loved Troy's message to Gabriella and the drama of the disciplinary hearing. She is so, so lucky.

Can Troy see again? I got that impression as did Taylor.

I really really enjoyed the opening Gabriella thought process in relation to Sharpay. I love that she is being torn between how she feels toward her - very in character. And I really enjoyed her reaction to Troy's way of dealing with the information. In the initial instance where she chose to be angry with Sharpay first, I was worried that maybe she wasn't going to focus on Troy's behaviour. I don't think it's black and white but it makes sense for Gabriella to be upset about it. But she's not in that place of, that's it we're over. A lot of authors depict that if Troy and Gabriella have a disagreement or fight, that it is potentially relationship ending. People can be upset with one another and continue to acknowledge that they still love the other person and that there is an issue to work through.

I really loved the photograph and the line of
"Instead, it was now the first image she woke to and the last thing she saw before allowing slumber to take hold- and she wouldn’t have it any other way." Just... really cute and meaningful.

And following on from that "The mementos of good times, forever captured in photographs mocked her."

I love that Taylor was sent in Gabriella's replacement and that she wants to mediate between the two. Speaks volumes for Taylor's character development; given that in first place she never wanted them together and although it was her magic laptop skills that shut down the power and facilitated the Twinkle Towne auditioning, in many ways it was Taylor's highlighting Troy's behaviour (Taylor's overdramatic overreacted highlighting) over summer which led to the whole... situation. ANYWAY. Yes muchly liked this. Tape was both cute as well as poignant - sometimes the best way to hear what someone has to say is when you can just sit and listen to them speaking from the heart, nothing in the way.

"I know I’m a jerk, but you won’t like give it your dog to use as a toy or accidentally throw it out the window, right?" - just love that line.

Loved the scene with Troy's parents - I like to include parental interaction a lot and there is something about a mature writer being able to actually pinpoint these types of advanced adult reactions that is just really poignant and real. I agree with their decision and I like that you went about it through this means rather than, I don't know, Ryan setting up a protest rally or something ridiculous.

Okay I'm all reviewed out.

Boomshakalaka, peace out.
-Dani xo

I love this story, I can't believe i missed it for so long, the drama, the relationships, just amazing and your portrayal of Sharpay is wonderful, i feel so sorry for her despite what she did.
Update soon please, I'm addicted and dying to know whats gonna happen with Troy and Gabriella.
Love Tink xx

The words Troy spoke on that tape, it would have been my undoing if I were Gabriella! They were so well written, great job! I can't wait to see what's next!

Aaw
Awesome Chapter
UD ASAP!

X x x Alexandra x x X