Wow, I usually dont read poems, but I came across this one, and I loved it! I also absolutely adore this pairing! :D Good Job!

Normally I avoid poems like the plague but this one was very well written and not dangerous to my eyes. Good job.
-*Cristal

Good job! I usually don't read poems, but this one was better than I thought. ^_^

Oh wow! I'm not one for poems usually but I LOVED it!! It was just that awesome =P

"-although forgotten when it comes to round and shiny-"

that part was cute...haha

I really like the way you wrote this! It really makes me think. And the chopping it up into lines gives it a really neat effect.

ahh! I'm jealous.

and the line about their eyes playing hide and seek... o.. that was good.

loved it =D

Ha! I didn't think you'd actually do it. I'm glad you did. Its won-der-f-u-ll-y

Well I've never heard of you before or this pairing *snicker* but I'm very interested!

Love it Marilena!

wow! i really like this, its very well written