please please, please update soon. i am no elf, ( no matter how much i wish i were,) so i don't have eternity to wait. :) great story, but i can't believe the elves missed that legolas was still bleeding.

Amazing story! So original!
Really enjoying it! :D Can't wait for the next update!

Wow this story totally has me in it's clutches. I can't wait until you update it!

Waai ^-^ Omg who is it...Nyaah I love this so much ^^ Sorry about my crappy reviews XD

I think this is a really interesting plotline, and I look forward to seeing where you take it!

Poor Thranduil, though i'm glad that Estel asked about him.

Keep up the great work that you are doing with your fic, and update when you can, RL moving so fast for me.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great week and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Aww T_T It's so...sweet...And...I like angst XD

I think this fic is well written and it makes me feel sad for Thranduil, and that is an accomplishment. I look forward to the next chapter.

Aw... I wonder of how the next chapter would effect Estel. *smirk*

Eagerly looking forward the next chapter... angst, give me angst - your story added to my C2 archive.

Thank you for writing, and keep writing and update asap!

*Hugs and Kisses*

Have a great day/night and keep smiling,

Sivan Shemesh

Oh... you are bad as me... but why have you had to kill him in the first chapter? *blink* *blink*

Great chapter as the angst inside.

Looking toward the next chapter, which should be right away.

*Hugs and Kisses*

Sivan Shemesh

I love it ^_^ Moreplease? T_T

Legolas dead? Oh dear! Yet I note that you say "*possibly* character death," so I will continue to hope.

Psst -- you forgot to add the A/N crediting the authors of those poems.

Nice work.
There were quite a few grammar errors, mainly with the dialogue and commas plus a verb tense or two. Do you have a beta? If not, you may want to look in to getting one. I don't mean this as criticism and I hope you don't take it as such, you are quite a good writer and it's a shame and a distraction that there are mistakes.

I look forward to reading more of this.

-Lasen

This is well written and your poetry is soulful and skillfully rendered!

Nice work!