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| Twilight Archangel 2008-05-09 ch 14,  | abuseYay! |
| Glory Nizenea 2008-05-08 ch 14, | abuseLovely! Very lovely. :) |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-21 ch 12, | abuseyikes! Poor Ryo, always bad things happening to him! Great work! |
| Crazyeight 2008-03-12 ch 11, | abuseMore memories, some more basic digimon 101 courtesy of Takato, some scanning stuff from ENIAC (I take it that Ryo's going to be getting his own digivice soon?), but aside from those and a cliffhanger there's really not too much going on in this chapter, so nothing much for me to comment on. Hm...well, 'till next chapter then. Later. -Crazyeight |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-12 ch 11, | abusetoo much "...pi..." from Piximon make me dizzy! Anyway, the past beings to clear... good job! |
| Griff4823 2008-03-11 ch 2, | abuseMe again. I stumbled upon your other fic (this one) while replying to your PM. Awesome chapters! (I'm on #2). Monodramon kind of reminds me of my own character's Monodramon with his little stutter thing and his general light-heartedness (I mean that in the best way possible, by the way. If this sounds like I'm accusing you, I'm not, since we both know that you didn't. I just found the similarity amusing (it kind of reminds me of something that happened with a friend of mine...Oh great, now I'm rambling..)) ANYWAYS, the point is that Monodramon is an awesome character (that sounded egotistical, didn't it...?Stop me, I'm doing it again!) THe point I'm getting at is awesome characters, awesome story so far, and I cant wait to read the rest of this! :D Now to send you that PM! |
| Crazyeight 2008-03-08 ch 10, | abuseHeh, wasn't expecting Takato to show up in this fic, but he had a good appearance (and IC too, though the circumstances regarding his appearance, and that of Impmon were a bit bizarre. Don't recall that happening in the series). Kind of ironic that Takato's giving Ryo a lesson in digimon 101 as in the series it would have been the other way around. :P Curious as to what your reasons were to involve Takato from Tamers rather then another character from the first two seasons but it seems to work out rather well. A little bit surprised that Takato's story didn't jog a little bit more of Ryo's memory but then we'll probably see that happen in the next few chapters. I take it that Milleniummon's time travelling capabilities will set things up so that Ryo and Takato can go back to the Tamers world, with Takato without the memories of this encounter so that events will proceed as we saw in the series? Anyway, good set of chapters here. 'Till next time then. Later. -Crazyeight |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 10, | abuseENIAC's a jerk...no wonder he goes insane and try to kill everybody... Great work! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 9, | abuseThe memory of his parents...that was so sad...so...*sniff* Great work! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 8, | abuseYes! Matsuki is in! I think Impmon was harder to defeat than he should have, I mean...two strong rookies against one... Anyway, good work! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 7, | abuseI don't think "Shit" is a word Takato would use... Nevertheless, that's a great work! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 6, | abuseI would plague them with questions until they gave me answers! Great work! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 5, | abuseAw that was a cute partner/Tamer moment! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 4, | abuseENIAC = Yggdrasil, that sums it. Ryo speaks! *surprise expression* Great work! |
| Twilight Archangel 2008-03-07 ch 3, | abuseI like how Monodromon is talking great part of the spotlight by him be the one talking! Great work! |