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| shopping-luva91 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous! I love it. great work! Email me soon ok? I've sent you a couple! xoxo |
| TheHamsterInMyMind 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseStunningly beautiful, and chillingly expressive. (^_^) |
| LeAnneKatherine 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseHey, I probably shouldn't be reviewing this in case I get it to critique but oh well, it deserves a review right now because it was fantastic. I love the use of the 'it's snowing' element :). It's so bloody inventive woman! Where do you get your ideas from? I must admit I didn't realise this had no dialogue until I read it back but it works really nicely like that. And there's a nice balance of angst and a little romance at the end, and 'And then the snow melts.' is a fantastic ending to the story. And Cath/Warrick, I think you really captured their relationship and Cath's feeling in particular, so well done on that too. Great job honey :) L xx |
| Grand Puba of All The Smurf... 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseAdorable. |
| hurricane1714 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusegood job I love Warrick/Catherine. So sweet! |