This is an extremely well written fanfiction, one of the best that I've read on this site. The way you captured Agony's evil was brilliantly done, and I especially loved how you wrote your fight scenes. Great job!

I read this story 8 years ago when I was 15. Probably couldn't grasp the amazingness of it back then...
Ash, you've got serious talent. Don't know if you're still reading this but I hope you do! And I hope you're still writing. When i'm done typing this i'm going to go look for more of your work.

My favorite part, in chapter 7"It didn't even mess up his hair." while describing the battle between ssj4 vegeta and agony. You amaze me with the simple humour in between this cold horror story!
Naomi

Agony...what a perfect character. It's amazing how you can created someone so pure evil. I liked her,no matter what they say. Damn you have to have guts to sing nursery rhymes for and toy with the prince of all Saiyans. God,when I began reading this story I was so intrigued. You kept me glued to my phone screen and I read it all in one day. It's the fic that made me want to rip Agony's fucking head off,scream with rage,kill everyone in my sight,cry myself to sleep till I dehydrated(which I almost did) and cry some more. This story made me cry even more than I did with Titanic,oh and believe me that was a lot. -_- You wrote the best piece of work I have ever seen in my fourteen years of existence. The way you portrayed everyone's feelings and fears was just so heart renching perfect. Vegeta...his feelings and emotions,hatred,love,lost whatever it was,was just so perfectly portrayed. I'm so glad you didn't let him kill himself. Oh and his nursery rhymes part...heh-heh...priceless. And Erik was fantastic also. I would really love to meet a guy like him oneday. He was so humble and responsible. Some parts I wanted to gag from the images in my head that you created,but that made everything so more interesting. What sick mind you must have to come up with all this gruelsome images or situations. I loved it. And Pan. You made her kick ass and she was exactly like I thought she would be even though killing Bra off was the start of this fic,eish...shame. But I loved that too. And Goten and Marron was just wonderful together. Truly. I never pictured them together until now and they make a way better coup than Goten and Bra or Trunks and Marron,you know? I truly thought it was so cool that you like put everyone in,except master Roshi and mr. Satan(-_- thank God
You truly are one kick ass writer!

This was the most sickening,gruesome,evil,twisted,dark,uncontrolled fanfiction I ever read... It was just fantastic.(And frikkin' funny for a horror
God,I never commented or reviewed that much before,but the pain in my fingers are worth it.

Keep up with the mind blowing work and just know- you are awesome! .
Much love and chocolate chip cookies.
L-Chan*Dies from heart attack*

OH MY GOD! AHhh, this story is sooooo good! Shit, you have to be the best DBZ writer EVER! AHH, I fucking hate Agony!

FUUUUUU this story is so fucked up! Holy Shit, this is some freaky bitch! Gah, you're such an awesome writer!

this story is definitely one of the best stories i have ever read. a very good plot and very creative. hope to read many more like it.

Okay from start to finish this was perfectly executed. From characterization to pacing, to the ending, I have nothing bad to say about this fic. I can't even begin to explain what made this story so great because it probably would require quoting the entire story in the review (and I only have around 10k characters so...
Wow! Thank you so much for writing this.

awesome. Agony was a real insane force of... evil.

hello!
I read your fanfic, obviously, and i absolutely loved it! i'm thinking of searching more stories about that agony of yours
I just checked your website, apparently, you invented Agony... you have one fucked up mind, really but all the great filmwriters have such a mind i envy you, kind of
well anyway, i don't know if you even read these things, and if you do, sorry for any mistakes i may have uttered in this "review(more of a fanletter, in my opinion
anyway, keep on writing)

Amazing, simply amazing... I loved the whole thing! You are truly the best DBZ writer, if not the best author on I have ever seen. I hear you are inactive, but if you get see this review, I would love for you to start back up, as would many other I believe.

This is seriously the best horror story I have ever read. I read it a few years ago, but it hasn't lost its excitment at all. I also gave a review for this story in a friend's website because it is on my favorites list. Trust me it takes a lot to get on my favorites.

Anyway... I love this story and i plan on continuing to re-read and review this time.

Lone Warrior2

"And Daddy, I want to ask you something."Yes honey?"What’s a cunt?
Best. Line. Ever.

Nice joke credits. I'm gonna' have to read The Legacy now. Is it on

"Unfortunately" I never saw many Grand Tour Episodes, so I don't know how they go SSJ4.

Editor’s Note: Hate Agony yet?

I have a feeling that was directed moreso at LM than anyone else. And I have to say not entirely, but she's definitely heading there...

i jst got one thing to say...ive read loads of fanfiction bt the way this story is written,it beats all...hats off to you...please continue writitng