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| infiniteternity 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abusebravo, it's been a long time since someone has ellicted such strong emotions from me... Thank you for writing |
| Hermione W. Cullen 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abusePoor Holden...I always liked that kid... Was that Pheobe who Stradlater talked to? I like how you did Stradlater's feelings, the sort of reserved guilt and grief...Bravo. You had some wierd errors, nothing major, but you might want to do an extra edit before posting. |