 Kaj-Nrig 2008-02-16 . chapter 1Zack seems strangely prophetic at the end there, but this certainly isn't a bad piece of work. And I must apologize; I'd read this story well over a week ago and I've been remiss in reviewing it.
It's a nice picture of what Aeris/th might've actually gone through, and it helps refresh her character.
I usually don't like these in-story stories so much, but this one's rather neat. Good job. |