What a lovely story! Well written indeed!

That was cute :)

And very well written too!

Kisses,
Cla.

Beautifully written. Lovely story :)

It's a good piece, but that little bit at the end-"The morning light might bring with it new adjustments and more verbal communication..." made it stupendous. I laughed so hard when I read that.

how cute!
sometimes the rest is better left to the imagination.
yes the tenderness was definitely captured.
well done

that was beautiful...
really it was...

This is a very well-written piece. You captured their characters in such a way that it could even be added in a sequel to the book. XDD Good work. Very short piece but you expressed everything you needed to in it. Happy Valentine's Day!

Erinn~

Aww, that twas wonderful! You're a great writer!

Marvelous OneShot! =)

~Nicole

Wonderful! Just the lovely diversion one could ask for on a dark snowy morning - deep in winter. It's been snowing lightly here for days!

You've captured their intimacy perfectly. Nothing was explicit and yet their most intimate feelings were revealed.

How I adore this story - you've done Elizabeth and Darcy very well! [I mgiht just go watch the filma again now myself... :-)]

aw...this is perfect for Valentine's Day. Thank you so much for this wonderfully written oneshot. Please do continue writing more P&P fanfictions. I find that I love all of your stories, including this one! And don't worry, my friends and I make sure to watch P&P once a month when we have our monthly movie/sleepover nights... =]]

Really sweet, nicely done.

Best,

MAB

that was sweet.

Lovely piece, like the rest of your work, very well written and not at all explicit. Lovely "indeed".