Excellent story and the end leaves stuff to be desired thoguth keep i going you know it woudl be awesome, and stuff... ((P.S. sorry if I'v enever reviewed before, my computer is screwey and tends to not send or post the reviews I do.))

this is great hope to read more...as for characters from the buffyverse...there's always anyanka or maybe the master or the first evil...I'll try to think of more