Reviews for Nat, you idiot!

Reviews For: Nat, you idiot!

LM1991 2008-05-31 ch 13,	abuseAnd the third one is unconscious... I want to know what happens, so please update as soon as possible!
Belle Chienne 2008-05-28 ch 12,	abuseI thought that is was very very good. I think it's better not italicized,the quotes, I mean, and i love the footnotes. I think they make up half of the story, kind of like it's own side story. I like the Queezle part to- always loved her character. You really pulled me in, and it has good connection. However, I will point out that this is the correct spelling: Faquarl To be honest, I can't wait for you to put in the next chapter. In my opinion, you could get away without italicizing the footnotes though, or having them bold, as well. It makes them seem like they are more important than the actual story. and a grammer thing- you need to put punctuation at the end of the speaking or quotes. You have question marks, but periods would be nice too. They finalize the sentence, like. Although, i think since kitty was abducted and saved, you should change the summary. My rating:B+ (aka- pretty darn good)
LM1991 2008-05-23 ch 12,	abuseTs. That guy is a big meanie. I hate him already, whoever it is! Please, PLEASE tell me you'll update soon?
Lucan 2008-04-30 ch 10,	abuseWow, very good. Although I was confused when Bartimaeus was fighting the afrit before I realized you had jumped forward a few minutes (hours?) in time.
LM1991 2008-04-25 ch 9,	abuseAww, that's so sweet! But er... go on with your story! Hey, by the way, I was for four days in London! All the way from Holland! That aside, so far, so good!
Eternity of Night 2008-03-22 ch 6,	abuseGreat story! Update as soon as you can! But the italics in the quotations is kind of annoying. Consider not using italics.
JessRules 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseKoolies Nice title, btw Keep up the writing, Monty Update soon or I'll set pillock on you Mwuhahaha

Return to Top