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| Radical Pretense Gothica 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseHuh. Cool. |
| NeverAndAlways 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAw. That's so sweet. You should make that into a larger story. Maybe using 2 lines to start a chapter? Love it! You're a good poet! x NeverAndAlways |
| Itchysocks 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI really liked the rhythym in the poem. What Iambic pentameter did you use? Or did you? Anyways, bravo! It was lovely and I really enjoyed it. |