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| Aching Bones 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseHi there, Loved this epilogue to Walk on the Wild Side...I read that before this and thoroughly enjoyed it...these two are just so hot together and could get away with just about any "undercover work"... This was a fitting conclusion to everything that they had been through together the last couple of days... Loved it... Ger |
| DaLiza 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseVery sexy and very sweet at the same time. Love the level of detail. Thanks for posting and brightening my day! |
| Hinata25389 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG that is amazing I love Bones and this is just the thing i was looking for you've made my day. Thank you. Luv Emz x |
| sunny78 2008-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseHot. I love it! |
| mistopher 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseohh that was hot! i love it! |
| mumrulz 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseNow I feel sad. :-( Epilogue = end = final = no more. The last missing piece to WotWS. I loved that story & you kept it going with your promise of a hot, steamy epilogue. Now that you have delivered, it means that it is finished over & done with. And that makes me sad. :-) But the epilogue 'Born to be Wild' made me happy. :-) And as you promised...no angst. LOL. What's wrong with a bit of gratuitous smut...nothing...you don't hear Booth or Brennan complaining do you?...or me?...or all your other loyal readers? Loved how the banter/bickering didn't change with the change in the status of their relationship & was about to step up another level. (Now can you please tell the writers of Bones that this can be done! :-)) **"But you said you'd tell me tonight and, lo and behold, it's tonight," he tried again, gesturing out of Brennan's lounge windows to prove that it was indeed night. "C'mon, Bones..." ...you gotta love an impatient & petulant Booth!... **the kiss deepened, the passion behind it indicating that their first time would be right there next to the microwave if Booth had any say in it. ...LMAO **"Really?" "No-one's ever offered suggestions?" ...Faster?".. . "Harder?"... "Deeper?" **Momentarily panicked by her estimations of his stamina, Booth soon decided that death by sex wasn't exactly on the list of Crappy Ways to Die ...OMG...I couldn't stop laughing at this..at Booth's reaction to this & the thought of sex in different locations with Brennan. Poor Booth, he doesn't stand a chance when Brennan wants to get one up on him. LOL.:-) **"I swear, if you pull any sort of toy or outfit out of your closet, I will be out of that door in seconds." She quirked an eyebrow. "Really?" "Okay, no," he conceded, his bluff having been well and truly called. "But I won't be happy about it." ...I think that by this stage nothing was going to put Booth of from achieving his...end goal. **"You- you want me to strip for you?" She nodded. "Now? Here?" ...yep...turn around is fair play...indeed, he got a lapdance we..uhmm..she deserves a striptease. **I want you to do it slowly." She smiled. "While I watch." "But yes, I will 'take my clothes off slowly while you watch' ...good to know that Brennan is as much a voyeur as the rest of us. LOL. ;-) **"Not unless you're planning on tucking dollar bills in my boxers." The look on her face told him she was genuinely about to check her purse, ...you truly had me snorting away at this...not a pleasant sound or sight at all, but I couldn't stop myself. LOL. Loved all the detail that you included, from the watches, to his tatoos, to his medallion & to his socks. **Gooseflesh prickled her arms and shoulders ...OMG...I also had goosebumps...so intense...so tender... The last 9 lines...absolutely beautiful Love everything that you write. Especially the ones with the humour that you do so well. Oh..& yeah...the smut's not half bad either. ;-) Looking forward to whatever you choose to write next. :-):-);-) |
| Temperance-is -a -virtue 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseVERY VERY STEAMY. My glasses are fogging up. _Virtue |
| spacekid77 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI've decided to have a catch-up-with-Bertie day! It's quite daunting actually, cause you've really been churning them out lately!! I loved WotWS... been a while since I've read it, but I distinctly remember not "trawl"ing a single thing in respect to that story... and how can you go wrong with gratuitous smut? Isn't that the best kind? "Bones, from the sound of your plans, neither of us will ever leave this room." **Fine with me... there's your next fic!! This was awesome Bertie... your descriptions were beyond amazing... just really damn HOT! Loved the attention given to tattoos (yummO!), jewelry, etc... made it much more personal... Ah, yes, the simple pleasures... no toys, outfits, trappings required (but they can be fun too!)... *Loves* ~space |
| Anny86 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! |
| CheeseBK 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseokay... these smutty fanfics reduce my linguistic abilites to things like: YAY or HOT or GREAT! ah.. or all three of them :) |
| a2zmom 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseVery hot! Who wouldn't want a private strip tease from Booth? |
| navgirl 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAu contraire, now I must find this lapdance you speak of... |
| TemperTemper 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseThank you for the undeniably hot image of a stripping Booth! This was all kinds of lovely, hot and sweet.. a perfect addition to that fantastic fic x |
| mag31 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseAh yeah, I remember very well Walk on the Wild Side :) I think it's the first story I read from you. Haha the lapdance, yeah I remember that too. You need some music, Booth? Try Donna Summers. 'I need some hot stuff baby tonight' *sings and dances* Very well done. You never disappoint me, you know that =P Please take your time writing what you plan to, first because I'm late on your multichapter (that's pretty selfish), then becausse if you don't you're going to turn crazy (not that you're not already crazy, all Bones fans are) and lastly because your readers will wait anyway ;) Take care, and good luck with everything! |
| danireed 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusethis was a great end to the story you did. you did a great job on this. |