This is good, I like it:)
I loved the ending line, it finished off perfectly.

But, one thing I don't get is wasn't Zane already dead when Tally say him on the bed? I recall it saying that she already knew he was dead, and if he had just died, his hand wouldn't get cold so fast.

I'm not sure, but as I said this is a good oneshot of Specials. Keep it up!

I must say, I'm impressed. For someone who claims never to have written something like this before, you did fairly well. For one thing, I like how concise it is; the story fits perfectly into five paragraphs. I like the first two sentences, which readers into the story; and the last one, which is poignant.

In the fourth sentence, there are semicolons in between the items, but why? Normally, you'd put commas in between the items in a series; you're supposed to use semicolons when one or more of them has additional punctuation. 'Heartbeat', as a noun, is one word. 'Bubblehead' has no hyphen.

A decent fic. Keep up the good work!
-Fanficcer

OMG!
that was probably one of the best one shots that I've ever read!
I almost couldn't finish Specials because of what happened to Zane-
good job!
-Dani

Oh, how sad. I misses Zane. I wish there was more fanfics for the Uglies series. This was really great, you should write more.

Nice fic! Keep writing more, like a David/Tally (since I believe you like David more than Zane) No offense, but I LOVE Zane, so therefore, I loved this story. I want to see another Uglies/Pretties/Specials from you!!

Finally found some Uglies fanfic!

That was just... perfect. It really sums up how she must have felt at that moment. Good job!