Interesting. I hope you write more of this in the future.

This story is great. Keep it up!

o i wanna see where you're going with this! please update soon!

Heyy~~ guess who? its animeice from deviantart!!

you said you would take anonymous reviews, but I got an account anyway!! and even though my computer was a spaz about it, I was determined! >:D sorry it took so long!

Anyway, great job! this is awesome stuff. I haven't ever read a FMA horror fanfiction before, so this is a first for me... tis exciting!! I can't wait for the next chapter...

Ha ha, too lazy to actually log in XD.
I like your story ^_^

Keep it up...or else...

~Twisted

So dark and twisted... I love it XD
Sorry for the late review, something happened in that I couldn't review on my phone anymore...

Oh wow interesting! Your going to continue soon I hope?

Yay! Blood and gore! Good jawb. Hope you update soon! :P

-Sked-San-san

Oh, poor Ed! He needs some love! *huggle Ed*

'Kay so I might be a little biased here... But I don't care! So I stopped watching FMA a while ago. It was just kind of boring. But this right here, is very mysterious... We all know how the blood got there, if someone that had never watched FMA read this, they'd think it was effing awesome. So Emmy, my friend... I think its about time you rip away from your FMA bonds. Go forth and writeth. lawl. Anyways, you've got a shitload of talent. In fact, it would make a great novel. It draws the reader in, makes them think, "How did the blood get there?" Is he a vampire?" "Who's the little boy?" You should publish.

Word. YAY! -Sked-San-san GG MAN GG!

...Beautiful. (you said one word right? *evil grin*)
No, the writing was brilliant, it was well executed and didn't end in some ragged, abrupt manner. (I have read stories like that; that don't seem to end cleanly. This wasn't one of them.) Reminds me of the scene in the anime with Tucker and Lust and Envy in the red room where he almost killed those people. It's like "what if he DID do it...?" an ominous question. I kind of thought Ed was more of the stab-yourself-in-the-heart kind of guy though, not the cut-your-wrists-and-die-slowly kind. Just my opinion though. Overall, it was successfully depressing and was smooth and well polished. It was brilliant. (man, I need a new adjective. -_-;; To the Thesaurus!)

Cool. You really got Ed in character (except, eh, he killed a bunch of people).
I'd like to see more of this story! Keep working!

--Figger po Jigger

Maybe he was drunk. XD But then again, probably not.

And vhat ahf it? It does very good job ahf keeping Edvard in character, dehspite the fahct that...ehh, well...he killed bunch ahf people. :)

Good job on this one!

Aiiro Hoshi

you scare me emms you seriosly do. have you read the twilight series yet it rules! so does warrior cats. The Flying Monkey/ dog says HI! blubloods is also awsomeness... conversation to self; got to stop talking to myself ... shoot ...rats...AH!(starts going crazy) then demonlord comes and says hello then flying monkeys attack, random