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| PrecariousEm 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseI have really enjoyed what you've written so far for this story, and I hope that you continue it. Please tell me you've started on Grief and Damnation :) |
| Dreamgoddess999 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, what an emotionally charged story and so very sad! I enjoyed reading your interpretation of Mick's past pre-vampire, but I must say I was a bit disappointed to get to the end and see those three dreaded words..."to be continued". I'm anxiously waiting for Part 2! |
| Verity Kindle 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseoh man. That is so sad- sheesh! Seriously?! argh. I like the historical details you include. It makes the story so much more vivid. You've really done your research! Awesome! History is my job, so when somebody takes the time time to include real historical elements in their work, well, it just makes me feel good. So thanks. =) |
| Renaissance47 2008-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI am thoroughly enjoying this story. It is very believable as a backstory for Mick. I agree with your supposition about changing names...all immortals eventually have to do a name change; except Duncan MacLeod, and he's just plain stubborn. I can't wait for the conclusion in "Grief and Damnation." Keep up the good work! ~Rennie |
| Pammie312 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseI can SO see this as a background story for Mick. Your knowledge of times back then and the way you described the conflict that religious differences can cause was well executed. Something very close to this scenario could well be played out on the show in future episodes (they do flashbacks so informatively). I look forward to the next chapter. |
| SeaChanter 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseVery good. Looking forward to the rest, eagerly :) |
| moonjat54 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseVery, very good. Very sad. You describe everything so clearly I can almost see it. Caught the mood of the times well. I am eager to read more. |
| xosummerxo 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusethis was a sad story... post more please |
| RedWitch1 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseoh as always wonderfully intense and descriptive writing from you... An excellent start, and I love your characterisation of Mick... can't wait for the next part... |
| wonder09 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is one of the most well-written stories I've ever read. I can't wait to read more! |