|Reviews for Halloween World Scourge of Time|
| eternalotaku5 4/20/08 . chapter 10
Raiton: Kaminari Muchi (Lightning Release: Thunder Whips)
The user creates whips of lightning in each hand that can be used to strike enemies. When they hit their target they make a sound like distant thunder.
Raiton: Denki Niku (Lightning Release: Electric Body)
The user charges his body with electricity. If an opponent touches him they are shocked. The user can electrocute the enemy by holding on to them.
Katon: Kobushino Kaen (Fire Release: Fist of Flame)
Flames engulf the user’s hands to make his taijutsu more effective.
Origin: The guy Spike fought to get his soul back.
Katon: Youyuu Buki Bakuhatsu (Fire Release: Melting Weapon Explosion)
The user infuses his fire chakra into a kunai or shuriken and the kanji for fire appears on it. When the weapon reaches its target, it explodes with force equal to the amount of chakra infused it and molten metal flies everywhere.
A large humanoid puppet with large antlers. It wears leather armor. The antlers secrete a slimy poison that causes paralysis on contact with skin. The poison is fatal if it enters the body as it causes respiratory failure. It has hidden blades in its hands that it can use to kill its paralyzed victim. It also has a mechanism in its mouth that allows it to fire darts that the user can apply poison to.
Origin: The Chaos demon Drusilla left Spike for.
Hijutsu: Kemonoou Fuin no Jutsu (Secret Art: Beast King Sealing Technique)
Juri seals one of Leomon’s Fist of the Beast King attacks in a piece of paper which can then be applied to kunai to give them a Fist of the Beast King effect. Can also be applied to fists or feet. IceLeomon’s Ice Beast Fist may also be used.
Hijutsu: Raion no Mure Fuin no Jutsu (Secret Art: Pride of Lions Sealing Technique)
A more powerful version of Kemonoou Fuin no Jutsu. Juri seals Regulumon’s Beast King Wave in a large scroll. When she releases it, she spins the scroll around her body, firing the Beast King Wave in all directions.
Hijutsu: Agenabe (Secret Art: Deep Fryer)
Takato coats the enemy and the area around the area around them with oil Guilmon uses Fireball to roast them alive.
Origin: A show on the Travel Channel about deep fried foods and Jiraiya’s oil thing.
Hijutsu: Thor no Tsuchi (Secret Art: Thor’s Hammer)
Izumi gathers wires together in the shape of a hammer and Tentomon charges it with Petite Thunder. One charged it can either be thrown at the enemy and be used to physically strike the enemy.
Hijutsu: [Element] Sandan (Secret Art: [Element] Shot)
Jenrya infuses his elemental chakra into Gargomon’s guns allowing him to shoot elemental blasts.
(I didn’t know Jenrya’s element, so just insert it into the name)
| TTrunks 4/19/08 . chapter 10
Awesome chaper in it's own way, not awesome awesome because nothing like awesome happened, but not bad. I understand this chap was important for setting back info and such. I think Drusilla should have a doll named Dru, small maybe the size of a childs doll, dressed in victorian era "Clothes" however it's powers send millions of razors into someone, and then exspldoes on contact or soemthing. The ideal thing would be a doll that looked liek a play thing, pathetic and totally un scary, BUT in fact had the most raw destructive power of any of her puppets sumilar to Dru herself.
Now as for captain hair jells abilities, it may be interesting to have him use a combination of a fuel, and hsi wind chakra, since wind feeds fires. Wich in this case woudl be hairjell, mostly because of the name above, but also it coudl be a semi decent surprise attack even if the damage was low, and it used low chakra, basicly more of a thousand years of death type technique, but still funny to me atleast.
Now my boy Spike, several fire utsus come to hand with him, one is basicly a hand full of metal beads ((THink shotgun shot)) super heated, and thrown at an enemy, however, unlike a normal fire attack, the super heated iron would stick to skin and continue to burn, thus the typical anti fire utsus wouldn't work against it, because the hot metal woudl be cooled down by them, but they'd still burn skin away on contact.
THe next is the "Torture spike" a flame chakra blade esk thing, channeled into ones palm, simular to the chidori blade, BUT thsi is mroe shaped like a drill, and with chakra roatation it's effect is also controlled by spike, anywhere from a bad sun burn, to microwaveing ones organs.
FInally I think spikes main weaon should be a pair of thick black brass type knuckles, with spikes between the knuckles, and the ability to absrob and use his chakra going white hot. Maybe blades on both sides to make them trench knives?
A ppoint I'd liek to bring up is Naruto and Matt shoudl SO get together, and no I don't mean Yaoi, but think abotu the simularities, both have blue eyes, blond hair, their freindship is their greatest strength, both of them have furry things that make them stronger.
Now for combo attacks, Spike and angel have to have soemthgin wing and fire plus they'd hate working together, so probably somethign awesome. Also somethign involveing wire like when they took down the demons.
| Sesshomaru'sgirl55 4/19/08 . chapter 10
Raiton: Ryuujin (Lightning Release: Dragon God)
Angel creates a huge dragon out of lightning and sends it at his opponent.
I created the names for these three using Seventh Sanctum and translating them so they’re a bit long and my translations may be a little off.
Katon: Kyoushu Ranran Chuusatsu (Fire Release: Assassin Fiery Execution)
Spike fashions fire into the shape of weapons and can either throw them or attack his opponent directly with them.
Fuuton: Akuma Senkou Jinpuu (Wind Release: Demon Flash Gale)
Drusilla enhances her already impressive vampire with wind chakra and runs past her opponent as a blur. The wind she creates in her wake cuts her opponent. She can also create a tornado by running in circles around her opponent.
Hyouton: Ryuuketsuzata Hyouchuu Renda (Ice Release: Blood Event Icicle Barrage)
Drusilla creates a multitude of icicles to impale her opponent.
Suiton: Mizu Funryuu (Water Release: Water Jet)
Drusilla expels a stream of water from her mouth with enough force to break bones.
A puppet resembling a black sheep. It can make a baaing sound that actually works as genjutsu that lulls an enemy into a false sense of security. It runs and tackles an opponent and then wrap them in spiny vines that can crush the victim or fill them with a variety of poisons.
Inspired by Drusilla’s song “Run and catch, run and catch, the lamb is caught in the blackberry patch”
Yatsuzaki Air Shot (Cutting Air Shot)
Takeru infuses Patamon with some of his chakra which Patamon adds to his Air Shot to give it greater concussive force and the ability to cut.
Cat’s Eye Genjutsu
Hikari and Tailmon combine genjutsu and Cat’s Eye to render an enemy incapacitated.
Hinokami Panchi (Fire God Punch)
Agumon fires his Baby Flame or Baby Burner at Masaru who uses his chakra to wrap it around his fists. He can increase or decrease the flame by sending more or less chakra to his hands.
| gaara'struelove 4/16/08 . chapter 9
-Style-Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
-Style-Ninjutsu and Taijutsu
| Tsukuyomi-no-kami 4/15/08 . chapter 9
| R.H 4/15/08 . chapter 9
Gabriel for Lucemon's name.
Angel-Ninjutsu, Lightning element with dragon summoning
Spike-Taijutsu, Fire element
Drusilla-Genjutsu and puppets (Hijutsu), Wind element
| eternalotaku5 4/13/08 . chapter 9
My vote for Lucemon’s name is Gabriel.
For when, where and who should they meet I vote Option 7.
I vote for Angel to be balanced with his affinity being Earth. I vote for Spike to be primarily taijutsu and secondarily ninjutsu with his affinity being Fire. I vote for Drusilla to be primarily genjutsu with hijutsu (specifically puppets) as her secondary with her affinity being wind. She could have a puppet named Miss Edith and maybe another one named Daisy since she once said “Do you like daisies? I plant them but they always die. Everything I put in the ground withers and dies.”
| Sesshomaru'sgirl55 4/12/08 . chapter 9
I like Gabriel for Lucemon’s name. It’s better than my idea. I just looked up names meaning light and didn’t think about names of angels.
I vote for Option 2 again.
Angel should learn Ninjutsu as his primary and Taijutsu as his secondary. His element should be lightning.
Spike should learn Taijutsu as his primary and Ninjutsu as his secondary. His element should be fire.
Drusilla should use Genjutsu as her primary and Hijutsu/puppets as her secondary. Her element should be wind.
| R.H 4/10/08 . chapter 8
I've looked at suggestions for Lucemon's name submitted by other people and I like Gabriel the best. Some of those others are a little out there.
My favorite option is Option 7. It gets a little tiresome reading a fan fic just to shift through things that have already happened, but altered a little. I think that later in the series would give more of an oppurtunity to change what happens.
I'd like to see Naruto with just Hinata, but everyone else seems to want a harem. I don't really have any suggestions of my own since I liked most of the ones other people have suggested in their reviews.
For the sake of aesthetics I'm going to suggest each of the Scourge learn a different kind of skills: Ninjutsu for Angel, Taijutsu for Spike, and Genjutsu for Drusilla. Also, a couple of people have suggested that Drusilla use puppets and that could definitely be interesting. You might consider secondary skills for Angel and Spike, too. Summoning jutsu could be good for Angel, maybe summoning dragons since he tames one in the "season 6" comic Not Fade Away and Spike could be use weapons like Tenten considering his use of railroad spikes. I think Angel should use Lightning, Fire for Spike, and Drusilla's a pretty hard call, maybe Wind or Water.
| Tsukuyomi-no-kami 4/9/08 . chapter 8
I like Gabriel for Lucemon’s name, like the archangel.
My pick for meeting is Option 5.
I like the idea of Naruto having a harem. It’s always nice to see the loser get all the girls.
Angel seems like he should use ninjutsu and taijutsu, as does Spike. Drusilla is definitely well suited for genjutsu. Angel seems like a Raiton affinity, Spike seems Katon, and Drusilla seems Suiton.
| Superdude101 4/8/08 . chapter 8
I think you should name Lucemon Gabriel after the archangel.
For arrival I vote for Option 7.
No pairing ideas, but I liked all the ones you picked.
Angel: Ninjutsu and sealing jutsu
Spike: Taijutsu and ninja weapons
Dru: Genjutsu and puppets
For elemental affinities, I tried to think up some new combinations.
Angel: Earth/Lightning for Magnetism
Spike: Earth/Fire for Metal
Dru: Earth/Wind for Sand
Why do they all have Earth? Vampires rise from the Earth when they are "born" and become Earth (dust) when they die.
| TTrunks 4/6/08 . chapter 8
Hello, I think it woudl be really interesting if you did a Narutpo Harem, since their are very few of those, and I've always liked harem stories. It's kinda funny the "Loser" is the one who ends up with all the hot girls.
Now as for the ninja skills, I agree with you for the digidestined, except I think Izzy shoudl also learn some lighting jutsus, him being the classical "Nerd" and because of Tentomaon's attack in the series was basicly shooting electricity from his wings.
Now as for the Scurge, I think you should make Anhel have an effinity for fire, since being a vampire fire is the worst possable effinety for him, and in turn give spike ice, since it is alot like him. Ice, can be water, and save your life, or snow and freeze you to death, it's a very good and bad element, it's also funny because ultamtely the thing that changes him is a tiny microchip, or a pieace of technology, that probably isn't water proof. I also think Spike would be good at Tai Jutsu, because in one of the episodes he says, "Ain't nothign quite like it, fist and fangs against a mod with tortches" or soemthing to that effect. Another possable element for spike that may be interesting would be iron, or metals, since iron is in blood, and also ninja weapons are made from it, and how he "Tortured people with railroad spikes" You may have ot make it liek a cross between the wood, and the sand for it to be ultamaetly effective however.
Drusilla, is an interesting question, again I have to say lighting may be cool since one way of dealing with crazy people was to shock them, another interesting idea woudl to have her be a summoner, or a puppet user, since she likes dolls so much. I can just imagine the female scurge walkign aroudn holding a dool, and then when she's threatened it turns out the dolls some horrable weapon designed to kill.
Now as for the time period, I'd say travelign with Jiriya but I also woudl liek to see a brood off between dead boy, and Sauske, but I think it would be interesting to do it in the village as well, as later on, so maybe presauke retrieval, but post chunnin exams.
I've gotta admit, Renamon/Kyubbi as a paring woudl be interesting, and is would be interesting for Angel to see hwo Naruto lives and vice versa, I kinda wanna see Spike and Angelous see a true in the Kyuubi, and see if they'd wet themselves, as well as see hwo orochiiteme liked fighting real demons, I can just imagine spiek ripping his head off, over and over because he keeps trying to reginerate.
| gaara'struelove 4/5/08 . chapter 8
Thanks for mentioning my RenamonxKyuubi idea, I hope you use it. I'm a big fan of NarutoxHarem, ChoIno, and ItaSaku (though I'm not sure if that would work well non-AU or non-OOC). As far as Chosen go, I can see JurixKiba for some reason, but you probably want her with Takato, and I can see KoushiroxMimi since they're the last of the older Adventure Chosen, and for some reason I keep picturing Angel and Tsunade together and back in the Buffyverse Lady Joyce shivers.
I vote for Option 7 because I don't feel like wading through all the stuff that happens through filler and I don't think we'd get to see what a jerkass Sasuke if they arrived before he left and prevented him from leaving.
Spike and Angel both seem like they should use taijutsu supplemented with Raiton/Lightning ninjutsu (Spike) and Doton/Earth ninjutsu (Angel). You may find it scary, but Drusilla is ideal for genjutsu and an affinity for Fuuton/Wind.
My idea for Lucemon's name is Hikaru (Japanese for light). I realize it's really similar to Hikari's name, but I really like it. Of course you could also go the Death Note route and just name him Light.
| Sesshomaru'sgirl55 4/5/08 . chapter 8
Lucemon's name: Lux (a unisex English name from the Latin for light). I like this one better than other names meaning light because "Lucius" and similar names remind me of Lucius Malfoy.
Meeting: Option 2. That seems like a good time for everyone to get acquainted with each other.
Pairings: NarutoxHarem (I love these kinds of fan fics), ChoIno, ShikaTem, and I can see Rock Lee falling for Mimi (pink hair) and getting similar results that he got from Sakura.
Ninja Skills: Drusilla-Genjutsu, Spike-Taijutsu, Angel-Ninjutsu, Lightning
| eternalotaku5 4/5/08 . chapter 8
My pick is Option 7, I like the idea of picking up right before Part 2 (Shippuden).
I don't really have any ideas for pairings, but RenamonxKyubi is an interesting idea and I'd like to see where that one goes.
Drusilla definitely has the making of genjutsu master like Kurenai, Spike seems more like he should use a combination of taijutsu and ninjutsu leaning more heavily on taijutsu, and Angel seems more like he should use all three. As for elements, Drusilla kinda feels like wind, Spike definitely makes me think fire, and Angel seems like he should combine different elements so maybe try a non-canon combo like Earth/Lightning (I read a fan fic where this was the secret to the Third Kazekage's special jutsu) or maybe something else.
I also have a little request. If you could let Angelus out for a little while to something unspeakably horrible to Sasuke that'd be great.