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| bookworm2011 2008-09-13 ch 4,  | abuseGreat job. Extremely well-written. A pleasure to read! |
| Kate 2008-06-06 ch 4, anon. | abuseGreat story! I love the plot and your writing is very good. I do hope you update soon. |
| Celebwen Telcontar 2008-05-30 ch 4, | abuseWow... very good. Poor Anakin, he has no idea who Leia is! CT |
| Harm Marie 2008-04-19 ch 4, | abuseVery good. I love the idea of a series. |
| lindajrjt 2008-03-16 ch 4, | abuseThis was quite interesting and the first time I have ever read any Star Wars fan fictions. Truth be told, I usually read the anime ones. This one was enjoyable and I look forward to reading more. |
| ILDV 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abuseGood. |
| ILDV 2008-02-18 ch 3, | abuseTouching. WOW. |
| Xenia Marvolo 2008-02-16 ch 4, | abuseAbsolutely brilliant! I love this story! Please update soon! |
| DarthGladiator45 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abusegreat descriptions of Lord Vader's hesitation and subsequent memories. |
| Sexy Scottish Accent 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseVery good story! It was very heartfelt and touching, and I can't wait for the rest of this series! |
| Dark God Silverterror 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseDamn it! I wish I decided to write a series like that. I really would like to write what Vader was feeling at certain moments. But you got the idea first. So I don't want to get you ** off by writing a moment where Vader said what was feeling. I was wondering. Could I write at least one story were Vader is describing himself, and everything he is feeling. Stuff like that. |
| Dark God Silverterror 2008-02-15 ch 3, | abuseWhoa! I think that should be in episode IV! This is to ** good! All my writing sucks like **! This is so cool. I'm really jealous of how a good writer you are! |
| Dark God Silverterror 2008-02-15 ch 2, | abuseDamn, this all could be cannon. Who cares if a fan made it. This is so good. Vader actually has feelings. Funny. |
| Dark God Silverterror 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseNice. This is good! I thought Vader couldn't have feelings. |
| Dolphingurl88 2008-02-15 ch 4, | abuseThis is so good! I love how well you've captured Vader's inner emotions, and make them fit with the original trilogy. Keep up the great work. |