This is the best story that I have ever read on here. Are you a professional author?

A very wonderful touchin chapter but...

And just to prove it, I promptly stopped the heart of the first officer who failed to instantly salute me, and stepped over his dead body as I entered the turbolift.

Poor officer...

Mm - nice!

Such a whirlwind of emotions, if Vader's feelings can be called that!

I have to be honest and admit that I was rather dubious as to the credibility of this idea, but I no longer have doubt that you can pull it off with *amazing* success.

The Force is obviously with you - so please do continue soon!

*claps* I really liked this chapter!

Keep it up!

Great story so far! please continue:)

A very promising start!

I hope to read more soon

Interesting

Good beginning. you write very well. You make the reader actually feel the emotion. That is a very difficult thing to do. Please update soon.

This is really well written! Your use of vocabulary and imagery is really captivating; you grabbed my attention right away. Hope to see another update soon!

S.S.A.

Ooh, this looks promising! Please continue soon!

Your description of Vader and his persona is excellent - well done!

Omg! This looks like its going to be amazing! I can't wait to read more!