This story has made my eyes well up so many times already. The emotions is conveyed so very well. Kudos!

Wonderfully written story, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Good story so far. I know I want to read more of it!

I know it hasnt finished and its been ages since it has been finished, but I just wanted to say that I have nbever ever cired at a story before I read yours, Its brilliant, and sad and wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time, You've managed to stir emotions in people and myself that we'd probably never new.

Your story shows the the true meaning of family and the reality of life into a fiction that turns it into a reality of truth.

It is simply amazing .

Thank you, FP

Well... what can I say that you possibly don't know yet? This story was probably the saddest story I've ever read (and you know how I always cry my eyes out when it comes to Fred stories), yet it was also a special story for a special, wonderful family. You portrayed them perfectly, you sent me on a rollercoaster of emotions with this one, and I can't say just how glad I am that I read this. You know, there are different kinds of stories: there are those that you read, like, and when they're over it was just another story on the list. And then there are stories like yours, those that make you feel not only for, but with the characters, that touch your heart because there's so much truth in them, and that make you think about your own life and somehow teach you something important. That's what this story is like. From time to time I found words in here that hit my heart and that made me think about my life, well you know about my mum and all I want to say is that actually 2 weeks ago I found myself at the graveyard for the first time in a very long time, and I can't help but think that it was also because this story made me reflect on certain things. And I can't thank you enough for this.
A masterpiece, really.
x

Thank you so much... for this absolutely perfect wedding chapter... for making me cry again... for mentioning Arthur and Fred in the right way at the right times... for making me think about things I've never thought about before... thank you. x

Aw that was simply perfect. Simple proofs are the tears on my cheeks and the smile on my face. :) I could SO picture Bill being the worried daddy, and who could blame him? It was great that he told Charlie first, that showed a lot about their relationship. They may fight at times but they know they can always count on each other.
Fleur's and Bill's dialogue had me in tears, that was just so beautiful to read. I can't imagine just how wonderful it must be like to see your baby for the first time, but I know quite a lot of pregnant girls and one of them just had her baby recently, and well... I guess there are just no words to describe it.
I was so proud of Bill when he told his family (hehe and thumbs up for George's comment on the baby's looks), and I'm so so happy for him! Finally a chapter that ended on a completely happy note ;)

I loved how George took control of the situation and made Bill go to see Molly. And it was good that George showed him that it's normal to feel this way, it's nothing to be ashamed of.
I felt sorry for Bill when he spoke to Ginny, it must be so hard to admit that, this time, he can't help her.

Good old Hagrid! (I'm repeating myself there, right?) Again he found exactly the right words for Charlie.
"It was always so good to see each other again after some time apart. One little touch was sometimes all it took." I could relate to this so much! Very true! (My boyfriend has been in England for almost 4 weeks now and I'm counting the days ;)) I really liked this scene with Ginny and Harry, although I sometimes still see them as little kids and have to remind myself that they're adults now ;)
I'm so glad that Charlie opened up to Eleri. He needed to get this all out of his head and sometimes you just can't tell your family, but need to speak to someone else.
Oh dear, I guess I was right in thinking that Bill wouldn't actually like Ginny's idea... I see trouble coming up again!

Uh well, at least Charlie allowed Eleri to come into his room... but they definitely need to have a proper talk!
I smiled when Ron told Hermione that he loves her, it was about time he said it! It's a shame that the sad thoughts caught up with them so fast!
I actually like the idea of Molly walking Ginny down the aisle. Somehow I think that if Bill does it, he might feel pushed into the father's role again.

I loved those conversations, both Ron/George and Hermione/Katie. I think it was good for Hermione to hear that she's not the only one who has to go through this, Katie does know what it's like. I'm also glad that George could pass Katie's words on to Ron. They really are quite alike, and I think it's nice that George can be there for his little brother.

That was an interesting conversation between Hermione and Neville, I liked it. The cases couldn't be more different but somehow he was just the right person for her to talk to.
I'm also glad that Ron found the courage to apologize for pushing Hermione away. He should have said that much earlier!
Oh Eleri's there now, that's gonna be interesting!

As you might have expected, this part about George and Katie made me get pretty teary-eyed. Again I felt so sorry for George, I guess you can never really get over a loss such as that of your twin, and although he does his best and seems to cope most of the time, he sometimes just can't fight this feeling of loneliness. He has his family, his friends, but in moments like that with Bill and Charlie, it's just too much to take. I'm so glad that he decided to go to Katie, and I'm even happier about the kiss ;) George's words about him wishing to be with Fred and Arthur made me well up, he can't possibly mean it the way that sounds? I really hope Katie will be able to give him the support he needs.

I think it was good that Bill said what he said. There's nothing wrong, and although Charlie might be annoyed (or disappointed) at first, he will soon understand his older brother.

I'm so glad that Harry was able to make Ron see sense about Molly's leaving. Well, this is Ron we're talking about, I almost expected him to have a go at his mum. That just doesn't make it right. I think it was a wise decision of Hermione to let Harry talk to Ron, after all, he is his best friend and - as Ron finally realized - Harry does know what it's like.

Oh I'm so glad that Charlie decided to contact Eleri. it's been a while since I read "Charlie's return" but I really liked Eleri. I hope she can help him. I'm still worried about that boy!