Reviews for A wish upon her star

animefan61 2008-05-03 ch 2,	abuseI really like this, I hope you write another chapter.
Yvy 2008-05-01 ch 2,	abuseA second part, Trance seems realy distant not that it's a bad thing, also there's a long 'Twinkle Twinkle' version? :D
squid109 2008-04-30 ch 2,	abuseStill a sweet story. Makes me think of 'The Little Mermaid' YOU do realizes that now you have to write the chapter where she finally meets 'her boy' face to face.
anarkeya 2008-03-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really enjoyed this. It fits Trance's character perfectly, and I like her connecion with Harper.
Yvy 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseThis is a really good idea, another layer to Trance. Make it longer? Please?
JennMel 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abuseThis is such an adorable one shot! Great job!
phoenix's shadow 2008-02-12 ch 1,	abusethis is really good and i love it! its just so cute!
squid109 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseYour basic premise is good. I think the story could be a sweet one. But you need to build it up to a full blown story with dialog and character interactions. It's just too dang short to do your idea justice. Please write more and expand on the idea.