What a despirately heartwrenching situation to be placed in. Neither one truly who they are pretending to be, yet upholding the roles to the extent of doing horrible self-harm. Still, at least they did kiss, and all that seemed to go through the moment communicated more than could possibly have been said. Maybe this isn't in your main storyline, but I have to say that it follows so closely that it really is completely believeable within the context of the main story and I believe could be woven in without much trouble.

I know three reviews in one day is a bit much, but I've fallen behind in my reading as you may be able to tell.
I don't think I can fully describe how this piece made me feel. But, I believe I can tell you that in reading, I felt every emotion that either of the two were feeling. The ache, the hurt and the love. It was like drowning, except I totally did not mind.

I'm glad that this isn't a part of your main story. I really hate the idea of them being together in any sense. That doesn't mean that I hated your story. It was quite good in fact.

Fantastic writing once again. Completely heart-wrenching.

Tres bien, as always.

I hate you so much, that it's unbearable. This was excruciatingly good. As always, it could only come from you. ;D

As per usual, I'll add this to my favourites list. Awesome job. *cries violently anime-like*

Conclusion? It looks more like a beginning.

I can never figure out why priests and nuns aren't allowed to marry. The Bible never suggests anything like that. In fact, if anything, it would encourage the opposite. I am rather dubious that will affect anything for these two, though.