Oh my... I want to give Minnie a big hug right now! It's always bugged me that Minnie is so often neglected or portrayed as weak, but your portrayal here was just... very exceptional. I loved that she covered up her wounds just... gah. It was very, very amazing and felt like it could've had a place in canon (if canon decided to focus on Minnie more for some reason) Great job!

I deeply enjoy the character of perseverance you put into the Queen; it makes her look strong, even if she is just a tiny mouse herself.

Amazing work.

great story its about time that someone showed queen minnie as someone other than weak. keep up the good work