this is very good, but list it under the A.I. category. More Artificial Intelligence fans will find it that way - I only found it because I was searching for I, Robot. Anyways, good job and keep it up

Oooooh, this is a great story. Please continue.

That was a very well written story, and I enjoyed it alot. I hope you continue to write!

Wow. Very engrossing. I look forward to reading more. :)

Yeah! I really liked your paragraph at the beginning of chapter 5 describing Monica's true thoughts about David and how they changed her attitude toward him as described thereafter. I couldn't believe in chapter four when Monica woke up in the car that her first concern was about Henry's possible angry reaction to the trashed car before wondering if David was all right! Yes, I enjoyed your story and the Monica's ending quote was creepy, but fullfilling at the same time.

I thought it made sense. Not saying that I'm Mr. professional writer or anything, but I would have edited a few of your sentences just a bit near the middle. :) Yes, it was nice how you thought about the loving decisions David (Or any other child mecha) would have made given the whole situation with Monica's accident. His programming matrix must have been totally cluttered after he fell down the stairs. No wonder this chapter was supposed to be weird. Please keep it up.

It makes perfect sense, and it's becoming one of the most original AI pieces I've seen yet.

Henry's getting senile...I came back to read it again, and found I missed the second chapter the first time around! :/ Of course, a complete turnaround. Beautiful. I though I was heavy on the mushy stuff! All the more, a great job!

Wow! I got a review from you on my CBTL story so I decided to read your stuff! You are a really good writer and a good review coming from you is a great compliment! I love this story!

That "mushy" stuff in chapter 2 didn't even come close to dull! Your use of quotes from the movie is very effective given the situation. I think the blending of both A.I. and Supertoys was balanced and well dispersed.

LMAO, S/K! You definitely have taken the story off on a unique tangent. Good job writing an alt-Aldiss.