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Lirre13
2009-10-30 . chapter 6
Will you ever continue this? 'Cause I want some more right now... ><
Sweetums128neo
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
Hey thar! Kyoichi-chan from DA. ;D

Nice to see you made a fic of that picture. < 3

I'm here making you unlazy. D; Very cool, I love the idea and how well you substituted everything with the original plot of the show. ;DD

SWEET!

-watches-
Snoessie
2009-06-21 . chapter 6
We want more :D :D :D :D :D This story should be made into a film or something, so good it is :D
Wolfinson
2009-06-10 . chapter 6
-Rolling around laughing really hard- Oh my god, this is awesome~!

Keep up the good work!
No spelling or grammar mistakes so good job!
Zed
2009-05-04 . chapter 4
*loves you*

Original idea you got here! Looking forward for the next installment~
Zirra Nova
2009-02-15 . chapter 6
Ohohoh. I like this story! First off, you are absolutely correct. There are not enough fan-whatevers with Dib with a PAK! Your writing is excellent, and I love how good you are at keeping small details that many(including myself) would probably overlook, such as Dib's need for water...which is dangerous for Irkens. I also love how whenever an Irken says Earth..you spell it with an i. XD I like the little things.

Dib is great, and very good at b.s.ing his way outta things. *snickers* And then there's Zim...I bow to your Zim, he is fabulously wonderful. Gir is adorable, and you've completely succeeded in keeping him pure as far as his Gir-ness goes. ^w^

I only have one question...Could MIMI see through Dib's disguise? Since Dib hasn't been taken prisoner I'm assuming not, but that gives me another question. If MIMI can't see through the hologram...why is Gir able to? 0w0

Gotta love how my singular question can mutate into more. XD

Anyways...I await the next chapter...*checks the last updated date*...Err...I rather hope you are gonna continue this. *wibbles* It's really good...

~Zirra *crosses fingers*
ZaTrIsTheBest
2009-01-11 . chapter 6
sweet
ZaTrIsTheBest
2009-01-11 . chapter 3
umm all this is is you finding ways to peace togeather peices of other storys "history" into a story so far.
keisan
2009-01-08 . chapter 6
Oh man! Lol, this is getting good! I'm excited now. Finally someone knows, more importantly Zim knows and they're kind of on the same page. I'm really curious to see where you go from here. I love this idea and it's killing me not to find many well-written ZADR fics; like amazing epic romances lol. I herald from the Harry Potter fandom (reader-wise) so I've been spoilt with long, epic romance fics that are usually quite good. This is really good and I'd kill to find some more.

Please update soon as you can! :D
Reincarnated Rat
2008-12-31 . chapter 6
Oh! I just can't get enough of this chapter. (Third time reading it, because it's just that entertaining.) I'm surprised I haven't reviewed it yet, but here I go. I really love this chapter and this story. It's a lot of fun to read and I hope you don't give up on it. I believe you captured both Zim and Dib wonderfully in this chapter(and story.) Zim was very Zim like in this conversation. You're just so brilliant and wonderful.

Reincarnated Rat
QuitexSoul
2008-12-25 . chapter 6
HA! I finally found a good IZ fic. ^_^
I've only recently got interested in IZ fanfics and so far I've been disappoited with the quality of the works. The fact that most of the good ones are abandoned doesnt help matters any. -pouts-
In short, love the stor and please UPDATE SOON!
Storm Dragon Girl
2008-12-25 . chapter 6
Where the heck was I when you posted this fic!
I love your plot, and your characterization of the IZ cast especially Zim and Dib. Zim should be an actor since no one in the armada suspected him for those murders (even Dib didn't think it was him until he pretty much told him in a way.). Thou Dib could be an actor too he just needs more practice since Zim saw thru him.

Anyway, I shall be awaiting your next update with much anticipation.
zeppelin13
2008-12-18 . chapter 6
Oh no, and it's only just getting to the good part! D= I admit I skimmed over bits of it at first, but I'm dying to know what happens next! I particularly enjoyed Zim's story of the war, and how Dib begins to realise that Zim's not as dumb as he thought...
Please continue soon! =]
dtgc
2008-11-18 . chapter 6
HEY!
WRITE MORE PLEASE.
THANKS.
SexySpoonsWillRuleUsAll
2008-11-09 . chapter 6
Great idea, and great story
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